Please review and find errors/bugs

Discussion in 'Websites' started by jazteck, Mar 27, 2012.

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    Hi,
    I think I'm about done with this site, KCIB dot com. Could you check it out and let me know what you think? I would like to know how fast it loads, if anything is broke, what you think of the design and if the text sounds professional. Let me know if there is anything you do are don't like.
    Thanks!
     
    jazteck, Mar 27, 2012 IP
  2. Jpolk74

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    Okay here is my review. Your site loaded up pretty fast and it also looks really good. You may want to think about rewording your homepage because you use the word "Then" a lot and when you read it out loud it sounds kind of run on even if you add periods. The rest of the site I couldn't see because every time I clicked on a link I got some kind of application error and it would close my browser out after I clicked okay. This happened with every other link I tried to click. Hope I helped.
     
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    I like design, picture and color combination of the site. But I am really worried about the keywords which you have written in title of all pages. It should be few not so many.
     
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    Thanks for the info!
    @Jpolk74 - Could you tell me a little more about the error you got and what browser you are using. I have tried Chrome, IE, Firefox and even a couple phones and I have not seen it. I see what you mean about the text. I think I'll get someone to rewrite it.
    @tomguy2020 - Good call. I just shortened them all. 10-15 words is good, right?

    Thanks for the input! Anyone else have any ideas?
     
    jazteck, Mar 28, 2012 IP
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    Other than those it is a solid site, but some of the pages took an insanely long time to load, and im using a brand new mac so you may want to look to see if that is a problem for some users (and i have full internet)
     
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    It looks very great, the only thing I would advice is hiring some copywriter or good english writer for website content, that's it.
     
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    @FreeRoamer - I just moved everything over to a new server. Could you check it again and see if it's sill slow?
    @Hiiiiiitch - I agree. Just might have to do that.
    Thanks!
     
    jazteck, Mar 31, 2012 IP