Please review and comment on my 2 landing pages

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by teamplayer06, Oct 19, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello all,

    I need some feedback on my 2 landing pages:

    http://www.accendotraders.com/landing/video.html AND
    http://www.accendotraders.com/landing/stocktradesecrets/

    I've been working on getting followers. Right now I have about 100 per video YouTube followers and 250-300 weekly podcast downloads. This doesnt include weekly views of my videos on other sites and on my blog @ http://blog.accendotraders.com

    My point - no one is buying :)

    I've tried the purchase traffic thing - NADA (I knew that was a longshot)

    You'll see one page has a professional look while the other has the traditional hype format.

    Any comments/reviews would be greatly appreciated.
     
    teamplayer06, Oct 19, 2008 IP
  2. zeekstern

    zeekstern Active Member

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    They both look great and professional. The second one takes a long time to load. I almost closed the page because your header is the last thing to load and all I was looking at for a long time was a black screen.

    The reason you are not getting buyers is not due to the looks of the websites.
    It could be something as simple as:

    1. Forcing people to watch a video to see what you have to offer. I don't like videos and would never watch them if it was required to find out what you had to offer. So, maybe write up some text for those of us who prefer to read and leave the videos for those who prefer to watch.

    2. Not getting the right people to your website. How are you driving traffic to your site? Are you targeting people in the "buying" stage or just any old body?

    Do you have any tracking set up to see how long people are staying on the site, and what they are clicking on etc?

    Hope this helps.

    Zeek
     
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  3. mjd2nd

    mjd2nd Peon

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    I like the first one alot, both are good...the load times are kind of high but that wouldn't be to hard to fix...also you just see the play button for the movies and honestly i wouldn't click them, try and have an image from the movie on the background (not just the play button), kind of gives the visitor a clue of the movie...just an idea
     
    mjd2nd, Oct 19, 2008 IP