Please Review and be Honest

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by littlepoppets, Mar 21, 2008.

  1. #1
    Please take a look at my first site. Have read loads of advice on here and think I am on the right track but would apreciate any advice. Thanks in advance.
     
    littlepoppets, Mar 21, 2008 IP
  2. moonywings

    moonywings Peon

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    #2
    good beginning. make it more professional.
     
    moonywings, Mar 21, 2008 IP
  3. skywalkerph

    skywalkerph Well-Known Member

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    #3
    source code
    i review your source code. you should have place your <title> tag before and outside <head> tag.

    text
    I dont like the big font and the color red in your text.

    adsense
    dont hide your adsense. place your adsense at the top of your webpage.
    i suggest add adsense before your content.

    name URL sub folder
    make your page title related to the website topic. not page1.htm, page2.htm and so on...

    for example:

    # Doll Shop
    # Bear shop

    Make a title for Doll Shop as "Doll shop" not page page2.htm
    and also for Bear shop
    :)
     
    skywalkerph, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  4. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #4
    Congratulations on building your first site. I think the font is too big and I agree with skywalkerph the name of your sub pages should be changed to the title of the anchor text you used. Doing this will help you to rank better in the serp's.
     
    kingofsanda, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  5. littlepoppets

    littlepoppets Guest

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    #5
    Thanks for the advice. Wil try to change Sub page titles but will have to do battle with Mrsite templates. Thanks .
     
    littlepoppets, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  6. AdamKirby

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    #6
    Skywalkerph is pretty much right on. I would definitely make the Adsense more dominate, at least by using a larger ad block, and possibly adding another one on the top or side. Great for a first site though. :)
     
    AdamKirby, Mar 22, 2008 IP
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    SEOBusiness Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Very slow to download at my end.
     
    SEOBusiness, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  8. BernardBlack

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    Some suggestions:
    1. Remove the white from the teddy bear in the banner
    2. Work on the buttons, they seem to be pixelated
    3. Remove the image junk at the bottom
    4. Make the content text look more professional (not so big / bright / bold)
     
    BernardBlack, Mar 22, 2008 IP
  9. gibex

    gibex Active Member

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    #9
    content looks like a spammy site.
     
    gibex, Mar 23, 2008 IP