Hi all. Would like to hear some feeback or comments on my sites. http://www.myebooksuperstore.info http://www.makeabetterlivingblog.makemoneywithus2day.com http://www.weightlossandhealth.info Thanks
i just visit your book super store site great job, your site looks professional but you may need to increase the quality of the picture its seen as vague for me good luck
Thanks for the feedback. I did not think that using the sub domain was a bad idea at the time, but now that I know a little bit more i realize i should have used a folder off the main domain. Its getting some traffic now so I will just keep it as is. @ itis - I will see if i can find some better cover art for some of the books. Thanks @ jdjaded - are you talking about banners for all 3 or just for the blogs? Thanks again for the feedback
http://www.weightlossandhealth.info/ - Nice site but the font size and style looks too small as default, try to enlarge its size a little bit..
The "weight loss and health" one has way too much text that is concentrated and not formatted well. Also the fonts are too small. The older you get the fatter you get and the weaker your eyes are. Your fonts are good for 16 year olds.. .and they shouldn't be fat. So you are missing your target. Use size 12 font for this group. Paragraphs should be no more than four lines. Break the long ones up. Attention spans are down and especially with fat people. They are fat because they don't follow the rules. They gorge themselves and eat the wrong stuff. They are not likely going to read long paragraphs. Its too hard for them. They will always take the lazy way. Ok. Flame on. People don't like to hear the truth.. but it needs to be said. And .. I am qualified to say this as a former fatboy! Been there done that.
I like the ebook site. . Overall your site are great. Add some colors in the design to be more attractive