Please reveiw my health blog

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  1. #1
    Hi

    Please review my health blog www.healthonweb.info. I just started this blog for promoting CPA products. Kindly suggest me add placements and let me know if this design looks good for health niche.

    Waiting for your valuable suggestions.

    Thanks in advance :)
     
    radhika.writer, Mar 8, 2010 IP
  2. Glinch

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    I like your this healthful design
     
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  3. 123extra

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    its parked domain
     
    123extra, Mar 8, 2010 IP
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    arivin90 Well-Known Member

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    I like your domain name, very good and suitable for health niche.
    Thanks!!!
     
    arivin90, Mar 8, 2010 IP
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  6. sajan1kota

    sajan1kota Active Member

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    #6
    Site looks very nice. very pleasant theme.
     
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  7. radhika.writer

    radhika.writer Well-Known Member

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    No buddy its up and running, check again...
     
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  8. radhika.writer

    radhika.writer Well-Known Member

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    look beautyful your blog,good work
     
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    not bad mate, i like the header, however i think a background wouldn't hurt, its too white there! Good Luck!
     
    cubeup, Mar 9, 2010 IP
  11. radhika.writer

    radhika.writer Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your valuable suggestions and feedback dude.

    Thanks
     
    radhika.writer, Mar 10, 2010 IP
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    #12
    Quite a few mistakes in the text. Doesn't make the site look good. :/
     
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    look it good
     
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    Love the look. easy on the eyes
     
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  15. radhika.writer

    radhika.writer Well-Known Member

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    Can you please let me know what are those mistakes so that I can fix that up?

    Thanks
     
    radhika.writer, Mar 11, 2010 IP
  16. WG47

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    #16
    Sure, I'm $5/article :p


    From a quick skim, the spelling is ok, but there are a lot of grammar mistakes and inconsistencies.

    Cholesterol sometimes has a capital C and sometimes doesn't.
    You keep calling it "the cholesterol" which is odd.
    You say scientific explanation, but definition would be more appropriate.
    Tran's fatty acids should be Trans.

    Like I say, the spelling seems ok, but it's harder for a computer to check grammar and make sure things actually make sense. You should get a native english speaker to proofread things.
     
    WG47, Mar 11, 2010 IP
  17. radhika.writer

    radhika.writer Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the head ups..I saw these mistakes earlier also but wanted to start web site ASAP so I ignored them for time being. Will fix them soon.

    Thanks
     
    radhika.writer, Mar 12, 2010 IP
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    Good site and domain
     
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    #19
    your site looks good specially your template but mcafee security warning coming while watching your site. do something for this and create more categories and pages
     
    dirocket, Mar 13, 2010 IP