Please reveiw my blog.

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    natkay2603, Apr 18, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    The text in the body of the document is too small, and the template is generic.
     
    kingofsanda, Apr 18, 2008 IP
  3. natkay2603

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    #3
    Thank you, where ban i get other templates from?
     
    natkay2603, Apr 19, 2008 IP
  4. ningen

    ningen Member

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    #4
    I think its ok. I think you could use a newer template. There are many free templates on the web. just search for free blog templates on google and you will find what you are looking for.
     
    ningen, Apr 19, 2008 IP
  5. john247

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    #5
    agree with comments about text size and template but content is quite compelling. I will return to watch your progress
     
    john247, Apr 19, 2008 IP
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  7. natkay2603

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    #7
    Thanks for all your comments i have made the suggested changes, any more advice is welcome.
     
    natkay2603, Apr 21, 2008 IP
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    sheilasultani Peon

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    #8
    You need to proof your site, lots of typos

    Otherwise, I think it looks good.
     
    sheilasultani, Apr 21, 2008 IP
  9. natkay2603

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    #9
    Thanks very much.
     
    natkay2603, Apr 21, 2008 IP
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    #10
    I think your site needs some additional color(s), I got the feeling it's like half done... just my opinion.

    Good luck!
     
    nihcer, Apr 21, 2008 IP
  11. oldmentor

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    #11
    Its looks good to me.
     
    oldmentor, Apr 21, 2008 IP
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    #12
    You misspelled "challange". It's supposed to be "challenge".
     
    Boris4ka, Apr 21, 2008 IP
  13. natkay2603

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    #13
    School boy error, thanks.
     
    natkay2603, Apr 22, 2008 IP
  14. mimm

    mimm Banned

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    #14
    Well I think your site is cool already. I like it.
     
    mimm, Apr 22, 2008 IP
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    #15
    Nice site, but it's all text. You need to include some eye catching media to really retain your users. You should also try to break up your longer posts into different paragraphs for ease of reading.

    The site design looks a bit bland, it could be spiced up a bit, especially the navbar.
     
    Joneagle_X, Apr 22, 2008 IP
  16. natkay2603

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    #16
    I have a current CTR of 11.1% is this good?
     
    natkay2603, Apr 23, 2008 IP
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    #17
    Very simple layout nd nothing foud useful.
     
    Angel2112, Apr 23, 2008 IP
  18. natkay2603

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    #18
    To someone who is used to making money online it probably won't be useful, but to a newbie i hope it will help them with the basics as i progress.
     
    natkay2603, Apr 24, 2008 IP
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    chillingbreeze Well-Known Member

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    #19
    Your efforts and motivation is appreciated :)

    Good going.. Add some useful and productive content on your blog so that people find your blog worth visiting.

    Good luck!
     
    chillingbreeze, Apr 24, 2008 IP
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    #20
    i know i've seen this template before
     
    archyboy, Apr 24, 2008 IP