Please Reivew my Blog

Discussion in 'Websites' started by seogoogle, May 14, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    Please review my Blog

    franking machine

    And give me your valuable suggestion

    Thanks
     
    seogoogle, May 14, 2010 IP
  2. impulseon

    impulseon Member

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    #2
    good idea friend
    the idea to have advertising as article on the blog
     
    impulseon, May 15, 2010 IP
  3. seller35

    seller35 Active Member

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    I think you did a good job. It is attractive with pictures and a good cartoon heading.
     
    seller35, May 15, 2010 IP
  4. 0k0

    0k0 Active Member

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    Cool site, I would add something as order button more up, someone might not scroll. Top banner looks good, but the text is not readable.
     
    0k0, May 15, 2010 IP
  5. PublisherPoint

    PublisherPoint Peon

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    #5
    I realize you're going for SEO, but this just sounds ridiculous:

    "We Offer Free Trials on Franking Machines and you can buy Franking Machines from buyfrankingmachine.com."

    How about changing it to something that has the same effect but sounds a lot better? Maybe something like this:

    "Check out our free Franking Machines trials or buy Franking Machines here at buyfrankingmachine.com"

    Something like that anyway.
     
    PublisherPoint, May 15, 2010 IP
  6. Quoolu (Christopher)

    Quoolu (Christopher) Greenhorn

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    It's okay. The content is well done. I think the site could use a better theme.
     
    Quoolu (Christopher), May 15, 2010 IP
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    webvietnam Peon

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    #7
    Your site need update more information, I think it good for google.
     
    webvietnam, May 15, 2010 IP
  8. seogoogle

    seogoogle Well-Known Member

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    Thanks I have changed Dec :)
    Yeh But I can't find Better theme could you suggest me Please :) , THanks
    I will do that sure, THanks
     
    seogoogle, May 15, 2010 IP
  9. BannerGuy

    BannerGuy Guest

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    #9
    nice graphics and nice arrangement...overall great website...:)
     
    BannerGuy, May 16, 2010 IP
  10. iRU

    iRU Peon

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    #10
    Seems like a landing page to me.. but its much better compared to other landing pages that I "landed" :D
     
    iRU, May 16, 2010 IP
  11. techlineinfo

    techlineinfo Well-Known Member

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    Looking good, especially the color combination
     
    techlineinfo, May 16, 2010 IP
  12. CarlDia

    CarlDia Peon

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    #12
    It is difficult to understand why someone would use your site. If you search on Google under the term "pitney bowes franking machine" there are almost 200,000 responses including the Pitney Bowes corporate website. They all offer the same deal. There are many large well-established postage and mailing machine distributors. They have customer service if you have a problem.

    Your website has no Unique Value Proposition. This tells visitors why they should do business with you instead of your competitors. Why should they do business with you? IT IS YOUR JOB TO TELL THEM. You have no Contact information. You have no information about you or who is behind your site. Your testimonials are about the machine, not about you. You have no Privacy Policy stating that you will treat emails with respect. The world is not waiting for you to offer a Pitney Bowes franking machine. They have lots of choices.

    Maybe this is the point: someone will feel sorry for you and know you need an affiliate commission and use your site.
     
    CarlDia, May 16, 2010 IP