Please rate this graphic!

Discussion in 'Design' started by HydraFx, Jul 8, 2013.

  1. #1
    I'd like to know what you guys think about this graphic. I haven't really worked on graphics much in the past year, I believe this is the last thing I did before I "quit". Depending on feedback I may start again, but please be truthful.

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    x/10 format? <3
     
    HydraFx, Jul 8, 2013 IP
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  2. lance71

    lance71 Peon

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    I think its cool. What will it be used for?

    The smaller text is hard to read.
     
    lance71, Jul 9, 2013 IP
  3. fox5ires

    fox5ires Peon

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    #3
    Yeah, you gotta be careful with the fonts/size almost buried in there. Your thing got a lots going on and can be a bit distracting. I do think it would look better if you put your texts on the left because it would bring more emphasis since the old man is facing left with his hands pointing in that direction.
     
    fox5ires, Jul 15, 2013 IP
  4. lance71

    lance71 Peon

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    I agree and perhaps move the character a bit more to the right hand side to give it more balance.
     
    lance71, Jul 15, 2013 IP
  5. Vernard

    Vernard Member

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    Looks good to me, could use more blending though. As for the text, you should make it stand out more.
     
    Vernard, Jul 16, 2013 IP
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    neest321 Well-Known Member

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    #6
    looks nice but there is some scope for improvement, is it for some manga forum ? the text font is too thin, the rest looks good.
     
    neest321, Jul 16, 2013 IP
  7. ZoeF

    ZoeF Greenhorn

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    Like many people allready mentioned the font ( black small one ) is nearly unreadable and i would advice to either pick a diffrent font or make it more visible ( bold maybe )

    I don't know if the strings on the left side where intended to be at that location or not. But i would place them like they come out of the hand.

    Be carefull with over blending in big images and blurring to much. It makes it look dull.

    The 1/3 rules should be applied to this signature. The 1/3 rule states that 1/3th of the image should be the eye catcher and the rest should be building up to the 1. In here you definity have a 3/4.

    For the rest i like the coloring and spike of this signature. And i would say keep on practicing, this is allready nice to look at.
     
    ZoeF, Jul 16, 2013 IP