After a few months out I decided to start back up article writing this is my first... what do you think? http://www.squidoo.com/Best-WorldOfWarcraft-Guides
You need to check your spelling and punctuation man. you're not your "Then I come across" should the "Then i came across" There are many more mistakes. Fix them up, put some full stops and commas in so it doesn't read like an excited 10 year old. Otherwise it's a pretty good effort man.