Please Rate My Fashion Company Logo

Discussion in 'Design' started by Jonathan Stern, Aug 18, 2013.

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    Büton Apparel: The button is once again a fashion symbol, just as hunters and gatherers intended it to be when they invented it during the Bronze Age 3,000 years ago.

    Please rate my 2 logos/suggest any changes. Much appreciated!
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    Thanks so much,
    Jonathan
     
    Jonathan Stern, Aug 18, 2013 IP
  2. Helge Sverre

    Helge Sverre Prominent Member Affiliate Manager

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    I am not a fan of the colors in my opinion, they clash quite a bit, Red and Blue is two colors one should be careful mixing together.
     
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  3. Jonathan Stern

    Jonathan Stern Peon

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    Thanks for the input Helge!

    Any other thoughts from anyone else?
     
    Jonathan Stern, Aug 19, 2013 IP
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    qwikad.com Illustrious Member Affiliate Manager

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    I agree with Helge. If, let's say, it was a logo for a smoothie shop, I'd say that red O looks great, because it would be reminiscent of strawberries.

    As a button, however, it looks kind out of place. Not exactly sure what that middle color should be. Navy blue, maybe?
     
    qwikad.com, Aug 19, 2013 IP
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    sarah Dawson Member

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    I love the bottom logo - For colors maybe a blue and orange mis might look good.
     
    sarah Dawson, Aug 19, 2013 IP
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    scurvy Well-Known Member

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    bottom one is good.
     
    scurvy, Aug 19, 2013 IP
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    tmh2k1 Peon

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    Hey Jonathan not bad. Clean and simple.

    A couple thoughts:
    You MUST fix the kerning on the script font. The letters do not connect. That has to be changed for something as permanent as a logo.

    Maybe the buttons might look better without the white strokes on the hole. Maybe get rid of those, make the holes themselves white and find another way to suggest "button." Perhaps the round inner edge - maybe a small inner shadow line. See attached.

    Or maybe look at images of buttons and think of another idea. 4 holes in a square does not necessarily scream "button".

    I think the color is fine with some adjusting. Maybe lighten the blue a bit. Seems too dark.

    Let me know how it goes.

    button logo.jpg
     
    tmh2k1, Sep 2, 2013 IP
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    The first one would need modification IMO. You have 2 parts to it, the inside circles and the cut up circle surrounding it -but they look too similar, perhaps I would have the outside circle less cut up, in 2 long pieces maybe? And then text to the right of the image.

    The logo you put below it... the text one looks like a better concept maybe... but I think the O needs work -maybe make it more simple... you have 4 colors/lines in it, blue,red,white,blue... looks too busy... maybe just 4 blue dots in the O would suffice.....
     
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    I agree, I like the second logo, but I would look into the color scheme a bit more
     
    tzemp, Sep 13, 2013 IP
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    Kafopija Greenhorn

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    I like the second logo more then the first, since it gives me more information about your niche. However, I agree with the guys that you should maybe choose a bit warmer colors. The "Distinguish Yourself" text line should be in another color then the main title, IMHO. But still a great work...
     
    Kafopija, Sep 13, 2013 IP