Please rate my campaign websites

Discussion in 'Websites' started by riskManagement, Jan 25, 2011.

  1. #1
    I've created the website for this company, how do you think about the pages? specially the free gift page, is it clear enough to describe the advantages and benefits from the product?

    overall what do you think about this company profile website?

    http://www.phoenixglobal.com.au/?pg=bullet-proof-your-business

    Thank you.
     
    riskManagement, Jan 25, 2011 IP
  2. tbarr60

    tbarr60 Notable Member

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    #2
    It wasn't immediately clear what the business or offer was. I would have a clear statement with a call to action. Have a statement like "Protect your business from crime and litigation" and then have a large colored button "Click here for a one step form".

    The site looks dated, like a business site template from five or ten years ago. Sorry.
    Thank you.
     
    tbarr60, Jan 29, 2011 IP
  3. Robico

    Robico Greenhorn

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    #3
    It is a very nice start. Here are some suggestions on how to improve the website:
    - Put some padding between the left and right columns as they are too close together
    - The blue border around the menu item should be removed.
    - The tiny text next to the man's finger should either be enlarged to be readable to removed completely.
    - The labels in the form could be moved to above the associated text field as this is better for user reading patterns.
     
    Robico, Jan 30, 2011 IP
  4. YourPublisher

    YourPublisher Peon

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    #4
    Very good color scheme but you should have better header and logo f or your site, otherwise site is looking good
     
    YourPublisher, Jan 30, 2011 IP
  5. netyards

    netyards Member

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    #5
    You can make your pages look more attractive with graphics and designs editing compared to using the basic theme.

    There are a lot of attractive color combination theme that you can select for your client.

    For me, it looks dull and not professional at all.
     
    netyards, Jan 31, 2011 IP
  6. manashseo

    manashseo Peon

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    #6
    Not interested with your sites
     
    manashseo, Jan 31, 2011 IP
  7. andy13

    andy13 Greenhorn

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    #7
    it is very interesting and well done.
     
    andy13, Jan 31, 2011 IP
  8. riskManagement

    riskManagement Peon

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    Thank you for the clear input, i'll try to improve it.
     
    riskManagement, Feb 4, 2011 IP
  9. riskManagement

    riskManagement Peon

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    Ok, I have improve the web somehow now and i got google PR 2. I've add some text for the explanation and a small form to get immediate action regarding the context on the left side menus. Can you help me to take a look at it and tell me how is it look like for you? is it clearly described the business?
    http://www.phoenixglobal.com.au/?pg=investigation <-- main page with menus on the left side
    http://www.phoenixglobal.com.au/?pg=risk-advisory-services <-- 2nd service main page also with menus on the left side.

    Thank you for your help.
     
    riskManagement, Feb 12, 2011 IP
  10. dhee

    dhee Peon

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    #10
    It looks like you used some bad template.
     
    dhee, Feb 14, 2011 IP
  11. musk_oxem

    musk_oxem Member

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    good, i like it
     
    musk_oxem, Feb 15, 2011 IP