Please Please take a review on my site.

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by JC007, Jan 28, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hi All,

    I have been trying doing many things, after things and things, I have decided to sell shoes :confused: . Please review my site and please do give recommendations or sample sites.

    Thanks all!!

    http://hpshop.homeip.net/hpshop
     
    JC007, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  2. abc1234

    abc1234 Guest

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    Hi JC007,

    Took a really brief look at the website and noticed:

    *No logo, should invest in a good logo.
    *The "Secure payments with Paypal" image is pixelated and it goes over the frame.
    *No info on the contact us page.
    *No about us page, which is good to build credibility with potentional customers.

    It looks like the website is still being completed, I suggest you wait until the website is fully complete until your put it up next time.

    Just my 2c,

    abc1234.
     
    abc1234, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  3. JC007

    JC007 Active Member

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    Hi abc1234,

    Thank you for your inputs, I really appreciated, the site still in test, that's why users still can not do any purchases.

    Thanks again.
     
    JC007, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  4. CompuByte

    CompuByte Well-Known Member

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    Dear JC007:

    I took some time to review your site closely and have gathered my thoughts and suggestions below.

    Create a custom about page; your about page should include information such as the foundation information (owner, date founded, headquarters location, etc.), quality and source of your suppliers, your goals, and any other information that you think that customers should know. I noticed that your current about page is a duplication of your wholesale source (SHOENET). Create the majority of your about page in paragraph format - you can bullet the key points in a summation, but the entire about page should not be bulleted.

    Purchase a domain - I would not buy from a company who has not invested the money in a domain. Consider your domain name to describe what you are selling (i.e. HP-Shoes) - simply choosing HPShop as your domain name may not be the best idea for search engine optimizing.

    Although your Joomla! theme looks well, I do advise that you work on your header area. The first thing you need to do is remove that picture of the shoes and replace it with a logo. Your logo does not to be very fancy - but it is definitely needed. Choose a slogan that will describe your niche (i.e. "Wholesale Shoe Source").

    Find a better PayPal image - your current version looks horrible, as it is improperly positioned and pixelated. Your PayPal image should be smaller and positioned in the bottom-right portion of your header. If you are having trouble positioning the item, use a CSS reference.

    Although I know it can be difficult and time-consuming, try to generate some custom content - the majority of your content is duplicate and the search engines will very much despise of your site.

    I wish you much luck, and God Bless you!
     
    CompuByte, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  5. JC007

    JC007 Active Member

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    Dear CompuByte,

    Great inputs!! thanks for your help.

    JC007
     
    JC007, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  6. Kassi

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    I like the colors, however the site looks incomplete.
     
    Kassi, Jan 30, 2007 IP
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    rochow Notable Member

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    The site looks good, just change the banner! It looks plain and out of place in comparison to the rest of the site
     
    rochow, Jan 30, 2007 IP
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    no need to change banner it looks good to me.
    but you can do work more with banner.but you need to work with your site.
    i m not satisfied with your site.
     
    spiderroost, Jan 30, 2007 IP
  9. JC007

    JC007 Active Member

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    Hello All,

    Thanks for all the good suggestions, I will be working on it over the weekend and please visit it again and provide more inputs.

    I really appreciated.!
     
    JC007, Jan 30, 2007 IP