Please, Please Review My First Squeeze Page :)

Hello to everyone I need some opinions on my website,
http://onecash.blinkweb.com/

Please leave me any comment.

Thanks a lot,
Erdy Yudanto

 

nice, maybe a header is needed but overal it's nice

 

* The testimonial is hidden on the page - it's got the same background as the rest of the page, so it does not stand out
* Like @ig2010 said, you need a header
* When I click the Twitter of Facebook button, the page says something about Cloud Flood - maybe you need to mention that somewhere on the Twitter or Facebook pages since many will be hesitant to go through with it if you don't talk about it ahead of time
* Who are you selling to? You use terms like "commission programs", "niche markets", "Targeted FREE Traffic" as if your readers understand the benefits.
* You change between describing your product as an "eBook" and "Report" - what's the user going to get?

 

cool , it doesn't matter with anyting else ..
i think you must get solution to get more traffic indeed..

 

nice work, but i think there is something is missing... u can add some nice n attractive images...