Please pick the Headlines that entice you to Buy

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by exoticpublishing, May 3, 2006.

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    My new copywriter is starting w/ the headlines & wants me to pick the one I like the best.

    I'd like to hear which 3 you like the best so I can gage people's reactions.

    Can you pls. give me the corresponding #s starting from the one you like the best to the 3rd best.

    Thanks :)


    Michelle
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    1. Former Escort Madam Reveals Her Secrets

    2. Former Escort Service Executive Reveals Her Secrets

    3. Secrets to Running A Successful Escort Service Finally Revealed - Former Escort Service Executive Tells All

    4. The Secret Life Of Escort Companies Revealed

    5. The One and Only Comprehensive Guide To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service

    6. The Only Guide To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service You’ll Ever Need

    7. Everything You’ll Ever Need To Know To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service Revealed

    8. Everything You’ll Ever Need To Know In Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service Finally Revealed

    9. The One Book All Other Escort Services Tried To Kill

    10. The Definitive Guide To Owning and Running A Successful Escort Service

    11. Leave The Rat Race Behind – How To Start Your Own Exotic Escort Service Revealed

    12. Insider Spills All – Exclusive Guide To Starting, Owning and Running Your Own Exotic Escort Service

    13. The Most Money You’ll Ever Make With Your Clothes On
    The Secrets To Running Your Own Successful Escort Service Revealed
     
    exoticpublishing, May 3, 2006 IP
  2. ahkip

    ahkip Prominent Member

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    #2
    i would use #1.
    #4 is bad IMO, it might get you into trouble...
     
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  3. jaree

    jaree Well-Known Member

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    #3
    I would pick #1 LOL
     
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  4. Pootwan

    Pootwan Active Member

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    1. Former Escort Madam Reveals Her Secrets
    Good, intesting

    2. Former Escort Service Executive Reveals Her Secrets
    Confusing

    3. Secrets to Running A Successful Escort Service Finally Revealed - Former Escort Service Executive Tells All
    Sounds spammy

    4. The Secret Life Of Escort Companies Revealed
    Ok, slightly spammy

    5. The One and Only Comprehensive Guide To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service
    Spammy

    6. The Only Guide To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service You’ll Ever Need
    Ditto

    7. Everything You’ll Ever Need To Know To Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service Revealed
    Such a cliche it's a bit like a joke title, could be ok if done as a joke

    8. Everything You’ll Ever Need To Know In Starting and Running Your Own Escort Service Finally Revealed
    Ditto

    9. The One Book All Other Escort Services Tried To Kill
    Would make me click

    10. The Definitive Guide To Owning and Running A Successful Escort Service
    Boring, but at least it will filter out those not interested

    11. Leave The Rat Race Behind – How To Start Your Own Exotic Escort Service Revealed
    Get Rich Quick

    12. Insider Spills All – Exclusive Guide To Starting, Owning and Running Your Own Exotic Escort Service
    News of the world headline, ok I guess

    13. The Most Money You’ll Ever Make With Your Clothes On
    Fun, would make me click
     
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  5. exoticpublishing

    exoticpublishing Well-Known Member

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    #5
    LOL, you didn't need to go thru them, but thanks for your pov. I'll send those along to him.


    Michelle
    P.S. Thanks samskpunk & Jaree
     
    exoticpublishing, May 3, 2006 IP