Please Make Me Better ;)

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Kyle H., Jun 1, 2007.

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    I would like to hear from the collective genius known as DP to help me make my site better. It seems to be stuck in a "rut".

    Thanks, I really appreciate this.

    http://www.Smoke420.com
     
    Kyle H., Jun 1, 2007 IP
  2. coldgansta

    coldgansta Guest

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    Hi there

    I found 2 things that i think you should change.
    at the bottom of your page you have a line that goes right across the whole page and into the borders this looks out of place.
    i would get rid of it and use the breen bar that you have under your header.
    allso your bottom links allso go into your border and make it look like a novice has done it.
    you should sort that out so your bottom links are containd inside your page.
    the rest look ok to me.but others may not agree
    g-luck freind

    allso i just noticed that the line that goes across your page above that there is a black dot and bellow that there is a minus sign they need removing they may me just typos in your code and are easy to remove
     
    coldgansta, Jun 1, 2007 IP
  3. ansi

    ansi Well-Known Member

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    i think i agree with coldgansta. lose the green bar and make the background on the adsense white. and that line at the bottom is definitely out of place... as for the rest it looks fine. but i would suggest working on the header image some as well. looks pretty amateur. also, the centered text alignment is horrible imho..
    just my thoughts on this. hope i wasn't too harsh on you bud.

    ansi
     
    ansi, Jun 1, 2007 IP
  4. stewartR

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    coldgansta is right, get rid of the green bar
     
    stewartR, Jun 1, 2007 IP
  5. 8everything

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    The design looks a bit plain.. header is a bit cluttered.. what I would do is add in a navigation bar on the left and move all of the links on the bottom and top there. (I'll give your site more of a layout structure)
     
    8everything, Jun 1, 2007 IP
  6. Kyle H.

    Kyle H. Active Member

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    Thank you very much guys, this is helping me. Anybody else? By the way 8everything I am from York U.
     
    Kyle H., Jun 3, 2007 IP
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    design looks fine, but work on the header and maybe organize the links through out the page better.
     
    Nima, Jun 4, 2007 IP
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    I hate center aligned paragraphs. I would advice you to increase the font size and make it justified or left aligned.
     
    Aragorn, Jun 4, 2007 IP
  9. thinkies786

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    deviantart.com <-- the following site has great templates,however its a website that displays FANART,and therefore ARE not for taking the same concepts,you may get inspired though.Secondly,the color scheme,black 'only' looks awkward.

    Hope it helped,;)
     
    thinkies786, Jun 4, 2007 IP