Please look at my blog and tell me what you think

Hey guys i have just recently made a blog and am a newbie at it and i was wondering if you guys could take a look and see if im on the right track, do you think i can get traffic or have people interested in it, be as harsh as you have to http://electricknowlege.blogspot.com/

 

Good and simple blog. You can add picture to make more beautiful

 

The header image is terrible.

 

Hi!

I don't see more than a paragraph in all of your blog posts. The posts are only one paragraph for each.

If you have paragraphs, people are more 'ready' to read.

Yeah..put some images for each of your posts too.

 

ok thanks for the advice

 

Hi,

It seems informative and useful, therefore with good potential.
In time you'll find out how to make its layout more attractive (careful not to make it too cluttered (sp?) )
When you have more articles (about 20) submit it to a few quality directories (not farm links) such as Blogcatalog and Topofblogs.

José

 

Hi again!

You have paragraphs! Congrats!

I think if you can make few more smaller paragraphs then now..it will be useful for you!

Also, put images or videos related to your postings, it will be 'relevant' to your visitors.

Good Luck

 

ok yea i'm thinking of putting some videos on right now im looking for some images to put on

 

I have been in the blogging world right from the early days. I also used ads. Please don't place ads on the bottom of the page. It might go unnoticed.

 

Whatever you do keep on updating it. If you can make two posts a day the better. Also, try replacing the header image but this time without the URL of fotosearch.

 

ok i got a new header image check it out

 

Honestly, I loved it and you managed to catch myself to stay a little longer in your site then before this. If you can...I know you can... try to create a light colored border for your image.

Good Luck

 

ok cool thanks man, i just really want to succeed and ill do anything to do so

 

I think.....

1. You should put a share button from AddThis.com below each post.
2. Add an interesting profile
3. You may also want to get a custom domain for you blog

This'll certainly make your blog better

 

You should also follow what khaxan mentioned in his post.

Good Luck.

 

Good and simple site you have. But if you want to compete on Google SERP it will be hard.
Well, you can compete with few condition. This is just my opinion and also my personal experience with Blogspot.
1. Update your blog regularly, once a day is good but twice a day is better. Google Bot love site with something new everyday, means G Bot will crawl your site every time more often.
2. Create unique and fresh content, do not try to duplicate. Duplicate content is fatal mistake for Blogspot.
3. Build backlink and never stop until you got the 1st on Google SERP.

Just my 2cents.

 

ok well will do this, i just bought a new domain to start off

 

Looks boring, and you are using default template. Change with something innovative template.

 

where is a good place to get some templates at?

 

yes you need it to get some templates at