Hi everyone! I just created my first website~ I'm hoping to get some constructive criticism. Please fell free to comment or leave suggestions on my attemt to promote a legit freebie site. http://freexbox4u.webs.com/ thanks Kathy Also there are referal links on the right side (in purple) that say "click here to sign up" I'm not sure if they work and people that sign up go into my downline?? Looks like the link just redirects them to the website. I think I need to test those... Would anyone be willing to sign up and post your sign up name? I need to make sure those are working properly. thanks
I was impressed by the menu bar design.It was creative and goodlooking.But sorry to tell you that the entire site didn't attract me on my first look.It was too dark.Applied the same color(black) for background and layout.It doesn't work better.Moreover the font style and size is not applicable and above the header iam getting the white empty box in same size of header,dont know whether it is still loading or the design seemes to be like that.Could you please clear me with this?I appreciate the work anyway since it was a first design for you and there is still time to learn a lot.Goodluck!Thanks for your effort.
The design of the header and the menu bar is good but the font on the page is too large you should consider making it smaller.
Try to create some space for the layout and reduce the font size a little bit. Another thing is that, rather than explaining to the visitors on "how" to signup, why not write on "why" you need to signup. People are more interested in the latter part.
The text in the header is the same color as the power on button on the screen in the header, try to change that.