Please kindly critic my page

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by Sxperm, Jun 4, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I would like to make improvement on my page. I need better conversion rate. Could you please guys please visit my page and make your critic? The critic can be in any angel but please consider this criteria if possible.

    - Which content or text should I add to increase conversion rate? If you do have some good copywriter to recommend me, please do not hesitate to tell me.

    - Which graphic should I add?

    - Is my current content placement good enough? How can I improve more by edit/move/delete some of them?

    - Is my current layout need some improvement?

    :) Thank you in advance.
     
    Sxperm, Jun 4, 2009 IP