Please help me improve

Discussion in 'Websites' started by 01wojtowicz, Apr 22, 2005.

  1. #1
    this is my first website and i had to do it all on a budget of £0
    so i need lots of constructive criticism

    www.pieboy.bravehost.com
     
    01wojtowicz, Apr 22, 2005 IP
  2. T0PS3O

    T0PS3O Feel Good PLC

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    #2
    LOL. "Don't complain about yout job!" :D LMAO.

    Feedback:

    Why put the title as pieboy.com when it's not pieboy.com? I'm not calling my site google.com because it isn't...

    Please tone down on the smileys. Just not professional (unless you target 13 year olds).

    Too light on content (homepage).

    LOL again - "What nuclear waste?" Like that!

    No obvious signs of SEO (what do you want this to rank for?).

    Your search - link:http://www.pieboy.bravehost.com/index.html - did not match any documents. Get links!

    I get javascript errors.
     
    T0PS3O, Apr 22, 2005 IP
  3. 01wojtowicz

    01wojtowicz Peon

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    #3
    it is aimed at about 13 year olds!
     
    01wojtowicz, Apr 22, 2005 IP
  4. Blogmaster

    Blogmaster Blood Type Dating Affiliate Manager

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    #4
    jake, will bravenet let you host your own domain name?
     
    Blogmaster, Apr 22, 2005 IP
  5. niceguy

    niceguy Banned

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    01wojtowicz If this is your first website then congrads Free host are ok just to learn but dont expect much more than that If you really become intrested
    in becomming a webmaster then you will really wont to get a top level domain name and better hosting. :rolleyes:

    Next Get rid of that nun Pic hehe :eek:
     
    niceguy, Apr 22, 2005 IP
  6. obiztek

    obiztek Peon

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    Hi 01wojtowicz,

    - Go for your domain & hosting
    - Focus on the website subject
    - Avoid Java scripts /frames
    - Uwe and follow ethical SEO techniques
     
    obiztek, Apr 23, 2005 IP
  7. just-4-teens

    just-4-teens Peon

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    #7
    get a real free webhost (http://iconrate.net)

    for 50 forum post you get 300mb webspace, 3gb bandwidth, 3 my sql databases, php, cgi scripting cPanel, fantastico etc + its ad free :D
    You can also host your own domain or use you.iconrate.net or you.ibsz.com
     
    just-4-teens, Apr 23, 2005 IP
  8. iqra_psh

    iqra_psh Active Member

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    #8
    nothing is there its and empty page
     
    iqra_psh, Apr 24, 2005 IP
  9. eyolf

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    I'd love to review it, but there was nothing there...
     
    eyolf, Apr 24, 2005 IP