Please have a look at my sales page

Hi Group,

I've written my first eBook. As a result, I have also had to write my first sales landing page which I have never done before.

I was hoping some people with experience selling would be kind enough to have a look at it and offer any tips or advice.

www.proxyserversforbigprofit.com

Thanks
Tom

 

I think it looks good. Plain and simple.

 

Thanks for your feedback, I'm going to try and get it activated with clickbank today.

 

well the site is really neat, simple and straight forward. but my question is "if you are able to make that huge amount of profit with proxies why you are selling that information for few bucks" no arguments here just thought of asking you.

 

It's actually explained why on the sales page, but its true!

 

It is really plain and nice site with concept of low cost selling.

 

Well I think it's too simple for me

 

What? I"m guessing you are just joking.

 

I like it a lot, because of simplicity and nice colors. But if it converts well, thats a different thing. Sometimes we forget to look at websites from a customer point of view after many years of working as a webmaster...

 

hmmm something is missing :s :s wait ... PICTURES, why didnt you add any pictures
and the testimonials box is rally poor

 

the problem is the simplicity , it hasnt to be simple, he's selling a product , he needs to do everything to make his sales page attractive
i think the conversion on this one will be 0%.

 

Pictures where? Throughout or in a certain place?