Please have a look at my sales page

Hi Group,

I've written my first eBook. As a result, I have also had to write my first sales landing page which I have never done before.

I was hoping some people with experience selling on clickbank would be kind enough to have a look at it and offer any tips or advice.

www.proxyserversforbigprofit.com

Thanks
Tom

 

I recommend you to add more pictures on your website. Also use bold/underline and highlighted text. It looks to boring to read the whole sales page right now.

 

Thanks for your input, I think you are right. I've made a few changes, can you have a look?

 

you need to make
Header
headline
more graphic design
and footer