please give me your opinion and critique for my website and video

hello, me and my team currently creating start up for car rental business
and this saturday we going to enter incubator program. we just make a website and video that wqe will use for pitching. please give us your opinion and critique

this's our website
bali.karental.id

and this's our video

 

Hi karental,

Overall, great website and videos! I could tell that both videos were professionally done and not "home made". They both engaged me.

With your website, the design and layout is great. You have a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but then again you're doing a car rental business in Bali and not America. All the links except for the Blog one work fine. Each time I clicked on the Blog link at the top, the blog would not load.

I'm involved in helping other entrepreneurs establish their presence online, and you're an excellent example of what a very good online presence looks like.

 

Looking so nice! But will be more interest if you may add some info about amazing places on Bali with some pics. For any tourist's this type information will be are helpful and increase reason take a car.