Please give me your opinion about my website

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  1. #1
    I have been coding this site for about over a week.

    I havnt added many products yet, but I plan on adding more (hopefully 2 a day for a month or so.)

    tell me what u think, all positive and negative critcism is accepted, just please tell me the truth.

    http://www.webseoblog.com

    thanks alot,

    --sean
     
    seanyboyyo, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  2. shehzi

    shehzi Banned

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    #2
    Content on home page and inner pages is not easy to read. I'll suggest you change fonts style. thanks
     
    shehzi, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  3. Revanche

    Revanche Banned

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    #3
    Need to improve your design.
     
    Revanche, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  4. brouwer

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    #4
    There are quite some things that should be altered:

    -The Mafia guy image is really distracting and doesn't fit your design.
    -The PayPal verified image needs to lose its white background.
    -The homepage is the same as the Mafia Script page.
    -The font is unpleasant to read.
    -The products page needs links to the different products as well.
    -You need a better header.
    -Use a different background-color in the content div than the site's background-color.
    -I think it should be SEO and not Seo.

    Good luck with it!
     
    brouwer, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  5. archangel

    archangel Well-Known Member

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    #5
    You need to change your logo, your colour scheme, and the font size :D
     
    archangel, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  6. kingofsanda

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    #6
    The layout and design needs work.

    - You should get a professional logo.

    - You should increase the size of the font on the page.

    - I think you should remove the mafia man.

    - For SEO purposes you should make the title of your page shorter, it's
    too long google refers to this as keyword stuffing.
     
    kingofsanda, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  7. ADI33

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    #7
    Looks good, but the font needs to be bigger, maybe a nicer logo?
     
    ADI33, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  8. seanyboyyo

    seanyboyyo Banned

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    #8
    thanks everyone.

    New Logo and bigger font and possibly backround color change.

    appreciated everyone
     
    seanyboyyo, Sep 21, 2008 IP
  9. Bryan C

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    #9
    Here's some few things I noticed
    -colors are boring
    -text needs to be change
    -dots on the right side of the line is quite annoying, hard to tell which line belongs to which category
    -and yeah a nice logo would be great.
     
    Bryan C, Sep 24, 2008 IP
  10. rowen77

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    #10
    looking good
     
    rowen77, Sep 24, 2008 IP
  11. *Mayank*

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    To be honest when I entered the site, I thought it would be a Blog rather than a website. The font looks really small and weird. Using a different font would be better. You need a logo. Rest is all good :)
     
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  12. malek256

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    #12
    The color choices here are extremely bland; content is not formatted (bold, etc.) - the formatting of blood town mafia would be superior to use here.

    However this looks an awful lot like another script I know very well - which makes me suspect you are selling warez and your 'please review' is really just a subterfuge to do a 'hey look at my stuff for sale' attempt.
     
    malek256, Sep 24, 2008 IP