please give me feedback on my websites

Discussion in 'Amazon' started by stebos3112, Jun 23, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I have been working on 2 sites over the past 4-6 weeks.

    The first:
    http://www.stebos-offers.co.uk

    I know I still need to do alot of work to this, but your opinions would be much appreciated.

    The second:
    http://www.star-trek-toys.co.uk

    This is the one i am mainly focusing on at the moment. I am working on seo for each page (slowly but gradually), ie got to http://www.star-trek-toys.co.uk/star-trek-action-figures

    It is ranking well on yahoo and bing/msn. I am still working on the seo so it should only get better. Google is such a pain though.

    Has anyone got any thoughts on how I can make the site better?

    Thanks
    Stebo
     
    stebos3112, Jun 23, 2009 IP
  2. abluegrape

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    Are they both made with BANS?

    The thing with sitebuilders is they dont really have anything original at all, and there is 100s of 1000s of them all of the same content!

    I couldnt find a contact or about us page, and thats the first thing I will look for in a site I have found if im intrested in spending my hard earned cash.

    There is nothing that stands out with the sites IMO.

    The star trek site would be a bit more niche but the other site has nothing to impress me, why not sell stuff that you like and have a intrest in and then expand from there?

    Its better to have a site/shop start small and grow than a massive site which every other online store sells at the same prices if not cheaper.

    Dan
    Tiger-Host
     
    abluegrape, Jun 23, 2009 IP