Please give me feedback on my landing page.

http://www.digital-reviews.net/topic/23/Web_Hosting_Lonex_Web_Hosting

It feels like it's missing something, but I can't quite place it.

Anyways, thanks in advance

 

I can't immediately tell what you are selling. The page also looks a bit boring.

 

I think what's missing is a Clickbank product. Maybe you intended your post to go under a different topic?

Anyway, your site is just an advert for a hosting company, but I followed the link, and it looks like they offer some really good deals. As I'm getting to roll out some sites, I might just go with them.

 

Blackmane:
Understood. Added to my list of things to change with that page. Thank you.

Filmwonk:
It is a clickbank product, I just hid the hoplink. The link to their site is a link to a meta redirect page which redirects to the CB hoplink

 

Blackmane:
Made it so the purpose of the page is immediately apparent, but I'm not really too sure how to make it look non-boring without it looking cluttered.

 

wow man... the worst layout I'v seen for a while. No offense, but you should organize it somehow. Now everything is mixed together. You should define thiner columns and align the elements with each other.

 

Criticism is good, so no offense taken
I'll work on the design, definitely. I'll come back when it's more organized.

Thank you.