Please Give Critical Reviews Of Landing Page

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by sp33dr4ge, Nov 16, 2008.

  1. #1
    I started a thread about my forex diary, however I need some landing page advise, more from a PPC perspective.

    Here are two sites I want to test.

    1) forextrading-4x dotcom

    2)forextrading-4x dotcom/forextest.html

    The 2nd is just a template I took from another and added my own content. I will continue to re-design it chaning background colors ect...

    Tell me which one you like and why.

    Here are my thoughts. Should I pre-sell mystory for a more personal approach, or get right down to all talk about fx robots ect...

    Is the site too long, are the links in the right place. Is the white background okay?

    Would appreciate any feedback from experienced Google users.

    Thanks again
     
    sp33dr4ge, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  2. Hastings

    Hastings Peon

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    VERY simple, but better than a lot... The second one is crappy, text is too close together, too close to the borders, etc... The first one isn't bad at all. Keep up the good work.

    PS: If you're really making $400k+/yr, why not hire a designer to make you a super-killer page?
     
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  3. Ripped

    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    The first one is better.
    I skimmed through the text, you seem to suggest that Forex Funnel is hands down the #1 Pick.
    You also said you gave it five stars, while you gave the other one 4 stars, yet, at the bottom
    you suggest the user to purchase Forex Autopilot (4stars) and not Forex Funnel (5 stars).
     
    Ripped, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  4. sp33dr4ge

    sp33dr4ge Peon

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    Ah Yes,

    Thank you ripped, that would explain why people are clicking more on FX funnel.

    I am converting about 1 out of 35 hops on Autopilot.... however Google PPC is a struggle.

    As far as the 400k anually... as I mentioned in my diary, I am not longer working in that field, or at least I am in between projects and I wanted to give CB a serious shot.

    I have begun to do outsourcing on the article side.

    Please keep the reviews coming on my landing page. Would like to hear more from other CB affiliates who do very well.

    Thanks again Ripp

    Regards,

    Tim
     
    sp33dr4ge, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  5. Ripped

    Ripped Well-Known Member

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    You're welcome, I guess the fact that you had a mistake in your landing page, just confused people and they didn't know what to choose, I think with the corrected landing page you will have better success.
     
    Ripped, Nov 16, 2008 IP
  6. jacky8

    jacky8 Active Member

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    Why didnt you cloak your links? Is it true that clickbank has difficulties in tracking sales if the links are cloaked?
     
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    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    I would go for the second one, BUT:

    1. If you get a nice header
    2. Proper background
    3. Center the whole thing
     
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    Hello, your page looks pretty nice. One thing I would add is a header promoting the two products. But in general a good job....:)
     
    adpablo, Nov 17, 2008 IP
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    Pranab Banned

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    Sorry but the grey boxes full of text are unreadable due to the colour combination. They broke my flow and I stopped reading the page from that point.
     
    Pranab, Nov 19, 2008 IP