Hi DP, You dont normally see my work in the review section, but i am currently studying Games design, one of my units is 2D animation, for which i have created a short (50s) animation for a game idea i have developed. http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1340009738 -= new link Please could you watch + critique my work (based on the animation not the game idea). Please include: Your Sex Your Age What you liked what you didnt like what would you do to improve did you understand what was happening overall critique on anything. N.B. this is my first ever animation, i need the results of your feedback for my studies and your time in assisting me with this is greatly appreciated. Kind Regards -Luk3