Please Critique My Squeeze Page

http://web2effect.com its gone under alot of transformation and so I am pretty confident in it.

What do you think?

 

Make the question larger then "I'll Hand Over the VERY System I use to make HUGE PROFITS Online with Web2.0..."

Otherwise it is decent.

 

Dude, You got to get a new layout!

 

Hm. It's not exactly soft-sell is it?

 

Ummm....I would consider using a spellchecker so you don't get "hugely anticipted".

The idea is fine. The layout just needs a touch of polish. The grammar and spelling you need to work on lots.

Advice:
If you want it to look professional. Hire a professional to go over it.

Hope this helps.

Col

 

Thanks for all your comments.

I am changing the layout right now, but I checked over the spelling with dreamweaver's checker?

Ill post when I've updated the page!

 

Page Updated.

It's more simple and eye-catching than before...http://web2effect.com

 

The type is too big at least in Mozilla. The green, that spoil the feeling of an easy layout very much, it makes the site look heavy. Create a logo and use your slogan together with it, this will make you site look like a website, not a newsletter. Good luck!

 

Yucky Green you used. Use a sober color - read up on some human psychology about colors before using them for marketing purposes.

 

Just Redone it in a fashion which you suggested would be good, Bombaywala.

Please let me know you thoughts

 

Not bad - much better then previous version.

 

powerful, I like it.

 

Just changed it to look more "Web2.0" what do you guys now think

 

your headers menul looks good but your main layout needs some change.

Regards,
Mustafa

 

What change would you suggest?

 

for examaples
- Background image
- maybe fonts of your texts

Regards

 

kewl okay, Ive changed it again looking for ideas and thoughts

 

somethings up with the bottom of the page, it doesn't display properly (but I am using IE6 )

James.

 

Just changed the page around - Its got more of a "website" feel to it now instead of the old plain salespage one.

What do you think?

 

this is better then old. right menu looks good.

Regards,
Mustafa