Please critique my first website!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by TheBigMastodon, Jul 12, 2006.

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    Here it is. Im looking for tips on how to make my site better. This is only the 2nd day it has been up. I have had about 30 unique visitors each day. Please post any criticism about my site that you have. I am hoping to make $1/day off this website once I add advertisements. Do you think it has that potential with how things are looking? Please leave any thoughts you have on my site. I value your opinion. Thank you.

    http://www.grungesource.com
     
    TheBigMastodon, Jul 12, 2006 IP
  2. usedmac

    usedmac Peon

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    #2
    This post would probably get more comments if you placed it in the Reviews section.
     
    usedmac, Jul 12, 2006 IP
  3. stupidfly

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    #3
    Alright! Nirvana used to be my favorite band. I like the wallpaper.

    “And I swear that I don’t have a gun.”

    Haha. Oh dear...
     
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  4. webrlis

    webrlis Well-Known Member

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    #4
    not good ......
     
    webrlis, Jul 13, 2006 IP
  5. Obelia

    Obelia Notable Member

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    #5
    It's a nice, clean, uncluttered design. But hey, isn't this supposed to be grunge? Muddy, dirty, unwashed and distinctly unpolished in both look and sound.

    Your site looks a bit too clean-cut to be mixing with this crowd, like some middle-class boy who's trying to annoy his parents by not washing and listening to Soundgarden, but you know he will be back at school the next day and studying hard for his exams.
     
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  6. sandossu

    sandossu Guest

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    #6
    I don`t like the design, it`s too fade and the menu it`s hard to read
     
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    #7
    Not bad for your first site. There does seem to be something weird about the nav bar. I'd look around for a different wordpress theme.
     
    wimbet, Jul 13, 2006 IP
  8. TheBigMastodon

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    thanks guys for your thoughts. Ill look for some new themes. Its hard to give it a grunge theme but also look presentable. Im going to have TONS of wallpaper, tabs, quotes, lyrics, videos and pictures on the site. I hope to make $1/day eventually when I put adsense on the site, I just want to pay for hosting and have some money to put into new projects. With some work do you think it could be a decent site and earn a few dollars for hosting fees?
     
    TheBigMastodon, Jul 14, 2006 IP