I just wanted to pop in and elaborate on the negativism subject. Your copy does contain quite a few negatives in it. First off you headlines should never be negatives. Second off, never use the word you or your in a negative sentence. Even if that is your target. Use the words like they. You want to have a 3rd person on any kind of negativity. They are the people going through the hard times. You are the person who found the answer to all your problems.