Please critique my business website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by IsaaCS, Jan 27, 2010.

  1. #1
    I posted this a few days ago but since then EVERY page has been drastically changed. Figure it's due for another round of suggestions.

    http://www.thesis-design.com/
     
    IsaaCS, Jan 27, 2010 IP
  2. Drdrizzle1

    Drdrizzle1 Greenhorn

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    Ya... I wouldn't drive traffic to this. Not going to convert. What are you offering. Like a complete website package? (Don't answer that) Just confused a little. If it's a design site you need build it out in flash. No offense. Pretty cool design. It'd impress my friends at least...
     
    Drdrizzle1, Jan 27, 2010 IP
  3. calummacd

    calummacd Peon

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    Interesting design having home in the middle rather than the left. I think it could do with a bit more text and a bit more space. OK about 6 / 10
     
    calummacd, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  4. neverfaithless

    neverfaithless Peon

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    Great basic design. I wouldn't drive traffic to it until it's complete though. Also, give it more text, maybe more pics of previous works. Testimonials from happy clients are always a good thing. :)
     
    neverfaithless, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  5. Linkbuildingoffice

    Linkbuildingoffice Greenhorn

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    #5
    great work, i like, nice to navigate and nice layout!
     
    Linkbuildingoffice, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  6. lejumeau

    lejumeau Guest

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    Pretty good.

    one thing is your pic or logo with the earth and head. the idea is cool but find a bit too much busy, and if the earth would be more in the brain area of the
    head it would make more sense, on your pic.

    but good work keep going
     
    lejumeau, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  7. RickyLM

    RickyLM Peon

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    Hi TD,

    I agree with drdizzel1 your a web desinger I would ad some flash in there and what ever other technicall skills you have. Show them off. That would be your silent sales men.
     
    RickyLM, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  8. vagabund

    vagabund Active Member

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    I would not use Flash on this site. I know some of you suggested, but simple design with good content will drive more traffic. Payment page need little work, and also logo of PayPal as payment options showing you accpet CC trough PayPal... Text should be normal, not bold, and need to be state excat about your policy, terms, etc

    Good Luck!
    Good looking site
     
    vagabund, Jan 28, 2010 IP
  9. IsaaCS

    IsaaCS Active Member

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    Thanks for your feedback! I think you guys are right, although a simple design is normally a good option, I'm a web designer, and I need to demonstrate that I can think creatively and have the technical skill to back it up. And I think I can do that. I'm working on a re-design now. Should be done by the end of the weekend.
     
    IsaaCS, Jan 29, 2010 IP
  10. CalebSpilchen

    CalebSpilchen Well-Known Member Affiliate Manager

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    Menu GREAT. Layout great. The text parts for services page ect would be nicer with a flash time thing.

    7/10.

    TheHoster!
     
    CalebSpilchen, Jan 29, 2010 IP
  11. jazperson

    jazperson Member

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    nice layout. I like the navigation menu and the content layouting. good work man.
     
    jazperson, Jan 29, 2010 IP
  12. Virginia1

    Virginia1 Greenhorn

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    nice, attractive logo
     
    Virginia1, Jan 29, 2010 IP