Please Critc My Landing Page from a Conversion Perspective

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Radico, Jan 26, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hey Guys,

    I have designed and developed a landing page process and I would really love to have some actionable advice to make it convert the best it can.

    Any advice is welcome, im looking to improve it.

    Thanks alot!

    saveeveryday.com (With Preview)

    saveeveryday.com/index2.php (Without Preview)
     
    Radico, Jan 26, 2012 IP
  2. nicelife

    nicelife Member

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    WOW ! well... it looks very good, very interesting, the colors are great, the info is good

    Its very pretty but juuuuuust saying...
    It may help to simplify the text above the pink button , or highlight the first words.
     
    nicelife, Jan 27, 2012 IP
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    Hello

    It looks very good, nicely designed, professional looking. My opinion is it will allow you to good conversion rates.

    Good luck!
     
    Raph777, Jan 27, 2012 IP
  4. purplepuppy

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    One of your biggest problems is going to be "believability" -- Try changing the pictures on the left of the preview with "real looking people" with testimonials below them if you have some.
     
    purplepuppy, Jan 27, 2012 IP
  5. MajsanD

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    Looks really good! I would tone down the colors and text that isn't a direct call to action. Just so you know, my IP is in a town pretty far away from where I live (I use Comcast) and so the city name field is a bit off-putting, I wouldn't drive there to show ever. I live in a small town though, i am guessing this is less of a problem in bigger cities.

    Also,
     
    MajsanD, Jan 27, 2012 IP
  6. zubizubi

    zubizubi Active Member

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    index 2 looks better!
     
    zubizubi, Jan 27, 2012 IP