Hi every body, I am developing a site for my indian cartoonist at http://cartoons4web.bravehost.com/index.htm Iam not good at written english. There are only few lines at aforesaid url. Please have a glance and suggest me a quick grammer correction. The first impression is Index page. Hence I want my forum members must see and correct my english. Regards Ramakrishna
I was starting to correct it but I got confused on the message you are trying to send out in your welcome paragraph. Are you asking for cartoonist to submit their cartoons via the contact page?
aaron nimocks, You are correct, yes...contact page will have my email ID...My cartoonist friends in India will send me their works (One or two cartoons) as a samples to me in zip format to showcase their works. We normally used to do this when publishers print Cartoon Directories. Thank you for responding.
Welcome to Cartoon4Web. I request all Indian cartoonists who visited this site to send their particulars to cartoons4web. Please go to Contact me page where you can find required details to be sent. Iam not going to extend much help to my Cartoonist friends as Cartoons4Web is at its initial stage and yet to take its final shape. But I can assure, you can easily find your favourate cartoonist friend/guru’s cartoons, addresses and their email ids so that you can say “hi†to them. to Welcome to Cartoon4Web. If you an Indian cartoonist and wish to have your cartoons displayed on Cartoon4Web then please visit the Contact Me page where you can find information on how to submit your work. The site is still in its initial stage so I am not going to offer much support until the site is completed. But you can be assured that you will be able to find your favorite cartoonist information so you can get in contact with them. (I am not sure what you mean by that last line though, but heres a quick grammer change) - even though my english grammer isnt always the best.
Thank you aaron nimocks, It is sweet and simple...That will do. Right now Iam going to change this. You can have a look at it after half an hour. Any point of time you can suggest me a correction on other areas on index page. Regards Ramakrishna
aaron nimocks, I have changed/replaced the original text with your suggested text. You can have a look at it. If you find more mistakes please post your suggestions on this thread. It is mid-night in india. Iam going to bed. Good night! Ramakrishna
amitpatel and aaron_nimocks, No problem...there is no end to know the things. Creativity is difficult than pointing out mistakes. (Amitpatel It is not criticism). I myself find many mistakes from my own draft when I read second time. Some grammatical mistakes are called clerical mistakes. These clerical mistakes occurs unintentionally. We can't name them mistakes...unless these mistakes pointed out by someone else till that time we won't bother to correct them. (The reason is... we ignore them in the process of framing the subsequent sentences of draft). That is the reason I always take help of my friends to find out mistakes of drafts. It is not only with english.....I follow this practise when I do draftings in my mother tongue "Telugu" in which I have complete command over the language. Iam an authoritative in my mother tongue still I forward my laguage drafts to my friends for corrections though they are not authoritative. I accept every correction sportively because out presentation must be error free. Thank you amitpatel...I will edit as ''If you are an Indian'' when I go home in the evening. Amit let us meet in Hyderabad any date in january 2006. Thankyou aaron_nimocks for sparing your time. My regards to both! Ramakrishna