Please check my site and suggest any improvements

Discussion in 'Websites' started by aaditya, Jan 16, 2005.

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    Ofcourse the site is not yet finished, but please check out my beta site Money Transfer to India.

    Please suggest any improvements.
     
    aaditya, Jan 16, 2005 IP
  2. ShameJobBlog

    ShameJobBlog Peon

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    If I was transfering money online I would want to do it with a site that is well established. Your site looks really new and does not yet offer the service from what I can see.

    Sites that give adsense such prominence also IMO tend to lack real cred as they are moreso perhaps just pushing their site to pick up the adsense revenue, so drop adsense or make it less high profile in the site.
     
    ShameJobBlog, Jan 17, 2005 IP
  3. my3cents

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    Agree. It looks more like a splash page. Get more content. And I'm not sure about the ad placement. Something about the colors of the links that don't integrate well. I would change the links to match the others on your site. So it blends in more.
     
    my3cents, Jan 17, 2005 IP
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    As a typographer I'm always at a loss in web layout, but I note that you could seriously improve the middle line of the last paragraph. Justified is working well with your light rules, so just add a few words to this one line. Say for e.g.: "is always open to criticism" and "you can send mail to the webmaster". Note also: "hereby" is, I believe, one word.

    Best to you . . . buteverde
     
    buteverde, Jan 18, 2005 IP
  5. buteverde

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    Sorry I didn't notice before: in the second paragraph the "our's" just has to lose its apostrophe . . . "ours". Did you ever come across that book about punctuation that was a best seller? English woman author and self-proclaimed obsessive. Imagine . . . punctuation, a best seller!

    Best to you . . . buteverde
     
    buteverde, Jan 18, 2005 IP
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    Hi,

    Your link (Money Transfer to India) is down

    Jan
     
    LogoMaid.com, Feb 21, 2005 IP
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    Sorry could not check and comment on your site, the site seems down. or not accessible.
     
    maverick, Feb 21, 2005 IP
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    well same here .. couldnt access your site .. server down ?
     
    jayeshonline, Mar 20, 2005 IP