Actually pretty good mate! Informative and looks credible. Only advice would be to minimize your white space up top. Perhaps move the big body of text to the bottom so that the product reviews and clicks start above the fold. You're wasting a big chunk of space above the fold there on the right, make another cell so you can have things to the right of that pic, or justify that pic left so the box/text starts beside the pic not below it. N. EDIT: When you get some consistency, STOP showing people your landing pages. I can guarantee you that this will be a quick way to get your landers stolen/duped and potential rev. taken from you much faster than keeping it quiet, asking a few people privately for help, and milking it if it converts well before anyone else finds it and calls it out or dubs it + throws bigger adsped/effort/kills your campaign.
the first thing I see is way too much white space above the fold. use this space to draw the user in to your content. check this google optimization webinar out from this affiliate marketing blog
Hi... It is cool... you offer free software to attract customer.. But, why you don't put opt in form? You can collect email list before user download freely.. As gurus say.. Money in the list...