Please check for Grammar Mistakes [ new site ]

Discussion in 'Websites' started by andrej, Apr 7, 2007.

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    Please check out my new site LifeRevenue.com and read the article carefully. As I'm not a native English speaker, I need someone to check the grammar for me.

    I will add to everyone's reputation who will review it for me.

    Please reply to this thread only if English is your native language.

    Thanks in advance for your help guys.
     
    andrej, Apr 7, 2007 IP
  2. andrej

    andrej Notable Member

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    Nobody? :rolleyes:
     
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    Notting Notable Member

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    Hi,

    I have sent you a completely rewritten version - The things I do for this community!

    Notting
     
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    andrej Notable Member

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    I've revised it. Thank you very much Notting for your help (rep+ added). :)

    Now I'm working on another new site CheapDesign.info and I would be glad if someone could check the grammar mistakes of the whole site (all pages: index, gallery, order, links) for me.
     
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    andrej Notable Member

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    Nobody?

    Couldn't somebody check my new site CheapDesign.info for grammar mistakes (all pages please)? I think it won't take you more than 5 minutes.

    Native English speakers only, please. I'll add to everyone's reputation who will check it for me.

    Thanks in advance.
     
    andrej, Apr 8, 2007 IP
  6. I-Got-IT!

    I-Got-IT! Peon

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    Hi,

    I've PM-ed you with the revised version of cheapdesign.info, please check your PM.

    =)
     
    I-Got-IT!, Apr 8, 2007 IP
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    Hi,

    I noticed that your site still had some grammatical errors, spelling mistakes and a few sentences that could be cleared up a little. I am a native English speaker. PMed you the revised version :)

    pengoo
     
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    Thank you guys very much for your revisions (rep+ will be added to you). ;)

    I haven't changed it all completely as you've revised it for me, but I hope it's OK as it is now.
     
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    Hi,

    On cheapdesign.info
    Change this to
    • Changed tough to though.
    • "I can design you a banner" is bad English because it implies that you will be designing the customer themselves! Fixed by taking out the "you".
    • "I have no much" changed to "I don't have much"

    Slightly further down,
    Same problem again with "design you", take out the "you" again to fix it.

    Otherwise, no probs.

    pengoo
     
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    Thank you very much pengoo.

    I've revised it. Also, it is nice to improve my English a little. ;)
     
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    I would change...

    I list below some tips on how to make cash online: to
    Tips on how to make cash online:

    Develop a website (or a blog) about something you are familiar with, drive traffic to it, put some ads on it and this may generate you some extra revenue.

    Hope this helps.
    Matt
     
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    OK, I've changed it.

    Thank you very much Matt.
     
    andrej, Apr 9, 2007 IP