Playhouse Review

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by bibinvmohan, Sep 10, 2009.

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    bibinvmohan, Sep 10, 2009 IP
  2. roguedeals

    roguedeals Peon

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    #2
    Not a bad start but some major improvements need to be considered.

    1) A better header. The graphic just doesnt cut it
    2) Less ads and REMOVE THE POPUP ADS... they are just annoying
    3) Actual images in your image slider would help
    4) Better SEO, for example, theres nothing in the Title
    5) Use Categories. I can't even tell what your focus is because you do not make it that apparent
    6) Fix the images that you do have. Your code is displaying before the images in your post instead of being processed. aka [caption id="attachment_197" align="aligncenter" width="350" caption="ROBINHOOD"]


    Those are just some of the immediate things I noticed right off the bat. You have a long road ahead, I hope you succeed. Put your hard hat on and go to town friend :)
     
    roguedeals, Sep 10, 2009 IP
  3. dc0ded

    dc0ded Well-Known Member

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    Looks good to me.. but the header could have been much better... I think you should work on it.
     
    dc0ded, Sep 10, 2009 IP
  4. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Looks good but it was very slow in loading completely.Header is not much impressive and need to be improved.
     
    netdriver788, Sep 11, 2009 IP
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    Good one but i am bit worried abt the header!!
    header could have been much better.... I think you should rethink working on this.:)
     
    seoboot, Sep 11, 2009 IP
  6. bibinvmohan

    bibinvmohan Peon

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    #6
    Thank you for your valuable advice:)See you ahead..
     
    bibinvmohan, Sep 11, 2009 IP
  7. Wajahat

    Wajahat Well-Known Member

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    #7
    header is not impressive....try to increase the words in the posts...
    google loves paragraphs and the long posts
    best of luck
     
    Wajahat, Sep 11, 2009 IP
  8. llxll_shaheen_llxll

    llxll_shaheen_llxll Peon

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    Hi, you have worked good on the site, but one thing; why should there be empty space?? Take care of that and the rest is cool.
     
    llxll_shaheen_llxll, Sep 11, 2009 IP
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    NMB Active Member

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    #9
    Hmm ... your site looks very interesting to me !!
     
    NMB, Sep 11, 2009 IP
  10. bibinvmohan

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    #10
    I have made some corrections in my site according to all of your advices..thank you..take a look at it again and give me more suggestions:)
     
    bibinvmohan, Sep 11, 2009 IP
  11. getadviced

    getadviced Well-Known Member

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    #11
    hi, bibin.
    need more content with words for the blog. And try to tag the posts with keywords.
     
    getadviced, Sep 12, 2009 IP