Pitch Page Review

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by smallmerchant, Jul 13, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello,

    I am new to the ebook business, and I was hoping to get some good pointers from affiliates and publishers. I wrote my first ebook and launched it this weekend. I don't know much about pitch pages but I have been reading this forum all weekend trying to find tips.

    Any feedback you might have would be appreciated!

    Nick

    http://www.thesmallmerchant.com/search_engine_optimization/seo_ebook.php
     
    smallmerchant, Jul 13, 2008 IP
  2. megacontent

    megacontent Guest

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    The image of the woman and the email support looks like an ad because the design is not congruous with the rest of the site. I suggest putting the same brownish-gray frame that the image of the guy with the laptop has. The other problem with it is that it has a white background... everything else on the page is creamy/tan.

    My eyes immediately focused on the woman due to the incongruous background color. I suggest you fix this... email support should be a small part of my focus, not the entire focus.
     
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    Thank you for the feedback! I see your point. I will work on it.

    Thanks again, Nick
     
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    Woman Image is not good,images should motivate to buy.
     
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