Paid Services Site (Review Please)

Hello,
I am looking for someone to review my new paid service site.

Currently we give paid posting, blog submissions, article writing.

Can someone review my new site please.
I just made it yesterday.


http://www.paid-services.net

Thank you,

 

As far as design goes, I would change the green at the top of the page to a different color (it doesn't match the rest of your layout)

I would also recommend either rewriting or finding someone to rewrite the content on your page. Since it is a paid posting web site, you want your sales pitch to have perfect spelling and grammar

My final observation is that you need to get all of the links working. In your nav bar, paid posting, blog posting and article writing all go to the same place.

 

It is a good idea to attract visitors by using this way. Nice job!

 

I agree with alfie, I'd also point out that maybe some sort of logo might do better than the guy up there. He just doesn't look real enthusiastic, you know? That said, I think you have a solid idea that could be extremely beneficial to alot of people. If you do need any site editing for copy/content, PM me as I know some journalism types.

Really great services, though!

 

I agree with the comments so far, the guy in the logo is kind of creepy looking lol. Pay attention to your spelling and wording of everything, a lot of what you have written doesn't actually make sense! "The highly demand of keyword rich articles have made us start Article Writing services!" that needs to be re worded for a start.

There is a very competitive market for the service you are offering, so make sure you go over every page of your site and correct the mistakes as you will find potential clients will turn away without even getting past the front page.

Good Luck with your site

Becky.

 

Yeah,
I kinda figured it out.
I am waiting for my personal editor to come online.
She is on vacation.

Thanks for helping.
The banner guy looks creepy.. yup.

Where can I get good banner for my site?
any ideaS?

@alfie.
Yeah, Forums link works, home link works, paid posting works.
I shall try to make sure that other links start working soon.

Thanks for your comments.

 

Come On Mayank

Made A Good Site
Good Luck

 

I saw this in your forum, where your writers apparently bill you for their services?

Have you just told the world that webmasterforums.net is buying posts? Unbelievable!

You are selling content/forum writing, yet the writing (including grammar) is .. um .. less than appealing.

 

We are not selling any bad quality posts.
If you have any proofs that we give a bad service, please show it.

Writers are paid to make good posts at the client's forum and not for making a posting report at my forum where we are conducting the business.

The post you have quoted is just a simple report that is made just to inform that they have made posts at the client's site.
And we don't ask our writers to look make quality posts at our paid-services.net forum.

Hope I have cleared your doubts?

Thanks,

 

You really need to find a native English speaker to rewrite your content, such as:

"It is really a pain to start off from a newly built forum or to revive a dead forum. That is the reason we have assembled here to help you out with your forum by providing good quality posts and threads. Try us and give us a chance to prove our worth."

 

I know..

After your reviews... I just hired a personal writer for my website.
He will rewrite all the content!

Thanks to you guys for reviewing.

Thank you alfie.

The content shall be changed in some hours and there will be no errors.

Well, I was so foolish that I have so many experianced writers for my company, but I hired none to do the writing for my site.

I appreciate your interest in reviewing the site.

 

Most of the contents have been rewritten

Thanks everyone.

Please review again.

 

Just wanted to let you know I reviewed the revisions but it seems that all your red "Read More" links aren't links? Also, not to be critical or rude but some of the grammar and punctuation isn't quite correct. Just wanted to let you know

 

You offer paid posting. But what's the deal?

 

I didnt get you?

Are you interested in getting your forum boosted by our paid posts?

 

the image quality seems a little strange, but cool otherwise

 

Thank you,

We are planning to switch over to Etomite CMS.

 

the images are pixelated
the header too

need a logo
and set a specific color palette and stick with it : light green, light gray, red,

 

Cliche'd logo and rough edges on the guy's suite and head. No logo, plain white on green (boring!), ADDFREE stats should be centered.