Contest Packaging design/mock-up $50

Great stuff - Don't really know if a critique is needed but if you feel the need to tweak :

There is a slight disconnect between the bigger packages in terms of consistency. The design on the small bottles is good because i can see the theme and the layout is the same on both etc (although it would be better if you used the same font for the product title on the blue as you have done on the black). On the bigger packaging, a few things here and there are different, e.g. I would expect to see a product title like 'Glutamine' on the left side of the big blue bottle in the same way as it is layed out on the 'Whey' tub.

Try and take what you have done on the small black and blue bottles and apply it to all the other sizes and shapes in a fitting way.

Also, and i'm being pedantic here, the red & black color scheme on the big whey packet looks at odds with the rest of the theme you have chosen. Keep scheme black & white and blue & white to maintain brand consistency.

 

Any more entries? Really want to announce a winner today. Not too late to enter....

 

Please wait for my revision.

Thanks,

 

my last try..

 

Great - can you post a larger pic?

 

thx for the feedback will post a revision soon

 

Im not home so i wasent able to access the hole mockup from the last entry so i changed the small bottles . Let me know what you think about it.

 

Excellent work! Nothing to change here, can you just add a halal certified stamp somewhere on the label similar to one of these (but use your colors etc to make it look like a natural part of the design)

https://www.google.com/search?q=hal...qIogSl24KgCw&ved=0CAgQ_AUoAQ&biw=1455&bih=705

 

Great - the winner will be chosen today so any late entrants should submit now

 

Great

Thanks for all your entries

The winner is:

Billi

Congrats! Contest Closed

 

ooh, awesome design.
congrats billi.

 

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Thx again for this contest.