This is a promo video for a new product i will be launching for owners of nightclubs and bars please tell me what you think http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jw22PowkD8
"Packed with tools like checklists and videos" - doesn't sound too exciting to me, but I'm not a club owner The video is about 30 seconds too long I think, it starts well, but goes on a bit too long. Personally, I'd want to see at least one of your fantastic ideas in action - and not just stock footage (that's what it looks like) with titles over the top. Also, your site seems to be down (for me at least).
I think it will be effective because it's to the point and clean. It leaves a little mystery which is a good thing.
the site is not up yet this is designed to be a teaser...to get a person interested in getting MORE INFO...not close the deal...other materials will give those details (also 90% of club owners have no idea what "stock footage is") The idea is that most are doing the same things (i know the industry very well) and they look for fresh ideas but not sure where to go...also I am a known consultant in the field, so my name will carry at least a little weight thanks kerosine so much for your candor! Thanks lee, thats the point...to get them to want to know MORE...so they are taken through a sales process.
I have to agree to the other posts... about the time, its too long, think about the super bowl commercials, they are 30 sec long! some are one minute. To make this more effective, and if it is a teaser, you have to cut alot of the information out, use key words that will catch the attention of a club owner. And do club owners browse the internet? I dont know when they would have the time...if they are up all night and sleep during the day they might have like a few hours to even think about going online. Just letting you know. The idea for a teaser online is good, but I think the best way to sell this kind of thing is through traditional marketing. If this is for yourself, and depending on your budget, why not send a few promotional cds to some of these places, that will probably be better if the total package is delievered well.
these will be delivered direct to them in thier inbox, or mentioned when i speak at seminars or meet them..i just put it on youtube so you guys could see..that is not how they will be attracted...the length is totally not an issue..trust me on that.
Ok so the video has been updated please give your opinions thanks! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3hHipNW7AqA
Yawnn… make it through half of it, not sure what it was about.. Maybe if you got an attractive model or a dog that does tricks.
lol thanks...its not something to entertain you when you are bored as it states...its talking to business owners, nightclub and bar businesses in particular
I think it was good and to the point... I don't feel it was too long but then again that's just my view.
I dont know if it was the down converting to the web or what but the colors seem way off. The quality isnt so hot either. The concept is good though.