Opinion on my affiliate page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Rocketwt, Dec 8, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hi everyone,

    I create an e-book with a e-mailing tool and 1,000 e-mail addresses but no one try it on CB. Can I have your opinion about my affiliate page to know if it is the problem?

    http://www.rocketwebtool.com/affiliates.php

    Some affiliates said me: "you don't have any stats, we don't want to try it". But if no one try it no stats could be create.

    If you have any suggestions to help me, feel free to answer.

    thx
     
    Rocketwt, Dec 8, 2012 IP
  2. Wulkanen

    Wulkanen Well-Known Member

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    The whole website is very nicely designed, but there are some things that keeps me from wanting to promote it.

    1. Unrealistic earnings?
    So with your software people can make £104,000.00 from AdSense, but it only costs $40 to buy? That's a big
    flag for most affiliates. It often means that customers will ask for refunds because they did not achieve what was promised.


    2. Misspellings.
    I read through your landing page and found several spelling mistakes and weird sentences.
    It's a fact that spelling mistakes costs sellers millions in lost sales yearly.

    Just look at this sentence:
    "As of this wasn't deal of the millenar, that guarantee makes great traffic without any hard working."
    It doesn't even make any sense. Also, is "millenar" even an English word?


    3. Bad proofs.
    The proof of income in the video and in the screenshots are from 2010, that's almost 3 years ago!
    Why would I want to promote something that has not been used successfully in the past 3 years? (with proof)


    4. What am I promoting?
    I see that it's some sort of software, right? But I have no idea what the software looks like or what it actually does.
    How could I sell something without knowing how it operates (unless I buy it myself first).


    I'm not trying to make you look bad, I'm just trying to give REAL and HONEST feedback. Because if I were to lie then
    you would not get anywhere. So I hope you do not take it the wrong way because I'm really trying to help here.
     
    Wulkanen, Dec 9, 2012 IP
  3. Sharpay

    Sharpay Active Member

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    You need to have a native-English-speaking person proofread your page. There are tons of strange sentences because the verbs have been conjugated incorrectly. For example, when you mean to say "deal of the millennium" or "Discover the method to attract so many hungry buyers that you can't satisfy them with all of your products."
     
    Sharpay, Dec 9, 2012 IP
  4. karmaseo

    karmaseo Well-Known Member

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    Need more convince about how to get payment and withdraw info from your affiliate page.
     
    karmaseo, Dec 11, 2012 IP
  5. Aiden Roberts

    Aiden Roberts Peon

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    Pretty much echo most of the constructive points above, I would add that if you leave it as is you will do more harm than good. Put it into maintenance mode and have it proofread, assuming your target audience is English speaking this will increase your take up ten fold. Be realistic with your claims, promise less deliver more is a great mantra and affiliates are wise to outrageous claims even if the claims are true alarm bells ring!

    Just my tuppence
     
    Aiden Roberts, Dec 12, 2012 IP
  6. Nawshale

    Nawshale Active Member

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    Hi.

    I visited your site. Looks neat and nice for me.
    Just use some native english stuffs to make it more understandable by others.
    And the rest is very nice. :)
     
    Nawshale, Dec 12, 2012 IP