I got 1/2 way through posting this and thought it may be at risk of bing seen as a spam but I can assure you that is not the case - I am the owner of the domain, the servers and the employer of the flash designers that created the page. I would be greatful for your input on this short ad page: http://wdpowersystem.com/Default.aspx?UserName=jonking &RefID=1374 (it uses a ref id so that you can see how many times the video was watched - That is a neat function that I can demonstrate too if anyone is interested...) I am using a combination of Flash Video and Flash animation to create what i am calling a "Video Post Card" Basically this goes out in an email to a persons warm market... because people like to watch videos... I'd love some feedback on the page, video and animation. Any and all feedback is appreciated!!
Well I watched half of it, I think the overall look is really well done, tight editing, good voice over, moves along at a nice pace, very professional looking. I am not sure if you wanted commenting on the script or not, but heck, while I'm here I may as well. I got through half of it and still was not sure what you were trying to sell.. (Although I did get the impression it was one of those, "If it sounds like bullsh!t then it probably is" sort of impressions.) Not sure what country you are going to target with this pitch, But where I come from, Pyramid schemes were made illegal years ago, and if you tried to sell that pitch there, they would kick the crap out of ya.. But apart from that. Great job! 10 points, keep up the good work! Cheers James