Hi guys. My friend, Brandon Spahn, and I have recently started a clothing company. I am 16 and he is 18 so we are taking a huge chance. Our site has just launched and our very first shirt is up for sale. Our designs our geared more towards our generation, but people of all ages can enjoy it. I'd really appreciate it if you guys would just take a look. Thanks. Onyx Clothing
You need to do a heck of a lot of SEO work on your site. Also, it would be a really good idea to have more than one shirt on sale; you should have a much bigger selection than what you currently have.
This is a good idea, make a shirt for teenagers but can also be accepted among adults, this is a brilliant idea. maybe I can try to order it.
The site looks totally unprofessional.you need to work more on the design ,Make it visually appealing.Only thing i liked was the design on the main page
Yeah, design is not so hot. logo is ok but takes up the whole screen, menu is too big, misc. should be called wallpapers or something else. Front page is the sales page - where is the pitch? All I see is a huge picture of nothing that I can think of and a small block of crumbled text. Make the header smaller, you can then fit the menu that you placed in the footer - FAQ may be a good option to have. Product page looks ok, can do some work here too... Cart is too small, I can barely see it on top.
Thanks for the reviews, but that wasn't the point of the thread. So thanks a lot to the asshole mod that moved it.
for the first time i look it, i don't think i got the Online Store idea, look like a art reviews for photoshop ? , maybe you should add some more appealing parts. Keep Up!
i agree looks like art review, make it more store like. had a hard time to find the shirts..... that can't be good for business
Hey, nice design.. I guess it would be great if you apply mouse-over color for the menu (Store - About - Contact - Misc.) , and made the join & shopping cart link more noticeable.