On behalf of......(feedback purposes)

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by MR-Honest, Jul 3, 2008.

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    I have been talking to, and very much enjoyed the discussions with a brand new company, who i shall be more than happy working with in conjuction with my company, however... they have launched/started a couple of lovely looking websites, and have asked me if i know of where to get quality feedback from on the net......HERE!!

    They have two sites i would apprieciate feedback on if i may ask....I will also forward comments to them, so they can then instruct myself or register in order to talk through any words you may have for them.

    Website: www.movenanny.com
    Website: www.landlordnanny.com

    (can you see the theme here!! lol)

    All feedback greatfully received, thank you.
     
    MR-Honest, Jul 3, 2008 IP
  2. tankard

    tankard Well-Known Member

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    Now there...

    Movenanny

    The title doesn't work! It has two lines and reading the first line I get "MoveNanny, your FREE online survival resource for buying,"
    What I think (if I am a visitor), I am not interested in buying, good bye!!!
    The site is about relocation, so base the marketing pitch around relocation! It should be obvious it is about relocation the very first moment I land on the site. At the moment it is not. I have to scroll back and forth just to get the idea what is it all about.

    Separate partners with a vertical line - they are too much in the way. This site is intended to sell its services, it seems that the only purpose being online now is promoting partners.

    A nanny should be more fun. Who made the logo? Get somebody to draw a nanny. Have you seen Confused.com logo? For me it is too wacky, but, yeah it is fun and it works. This logo does not!

    I tested it on loadchecker and the page is 350 kb. It is heavy - are there ways to make it lighter?

    Landlordnanny,

    The left navigation's a mess! There are three sections, right? Your Account, Main Navigation and Your Props should stand out, they need an embossed/coloured background or something similar.

    Frequently asked questions should be F.A.Q., FAQ or FAQs because faqs looks too much like fags - it looks odd to see it on a corporate/dynamic style website.

    What's the difference between "News and updates" and "News"? Why keeping them both?

    Partners section is not good. This grey thing looks like a part of the organizer widget.

    Now these were bad things, now about the good things :D The ideas are quite good, it is something new and fresh. The site designs are clean and modern only needs fixing some minor flaws and a new logo.

    Good luck!
     
    tankard, Jul 3, 2008 IP