OFFline Markting Website Review...

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Jimian, May 1, 2010.

  1. John84

    John84 Active Member

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    ...very typical sales page. Some bigger images would help as the amount of text on the site really makes me want to click out.
     
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  2. tdigitty

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    Like John said....very typical sales page. Be a bit more creative as you have with your postcard technique. At the very least, update your picture (may be current, but it's grainy). Looks very dated and some might think this site is out of date because of it, IMO anyway.

    My suggestion is to create a sales video instead of the long sales copy....it's going out of style. Check out all the top product launches, from top internet marketers...most use video. If they use video...there's a good reason, it converts better. Easier said than done, I understand.

    My 2 cents.... : )
     
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  3. Artisan

    Artisan Well-Known Member

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    There is too much text on your site. It is hard to understand fast what you want to say, and there is too much information disclosed. In fact, you have already explained your idea on your site, thus the visitor does not need to buy your education course, the visitor can just search for the post card sites in any of the decent search engines.
     
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  4. Jimian

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    Thank you for taking the time to check it out...will work on it more.

    JIM
     
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  5. Jimian

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    Okay, makes sense. Thanks for your insight!!

    JIM
     
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  6. Jimian

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    True, many people brought that up -- 'why do they need my program when I tell them what to do' -- yet they continue to buy it.

    No matter, I appreciate your feedback. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

    JIM
     
    Jimian, May 2, 2010 IP