offering genuine articles

Discussion in 'Content Creation' started by deepak_sharma, Aug 9, 2008.

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    iso2009 Active Member

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    #21
    Ordered some soccer tshirts reviews and got them in time and with quality. Next order is being processed :) Thank you!
     
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    #22
    Great work i have to say and fast too.. :)
     
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    #23
    You get what you pay for I suppose. He's offering his services on the cheap, however he clearly doesn't understand the English language whatsoever. His article was very poor, had many grammar mistakes and was difficult to understand fully. I don't know why he's claiming he can deliver "quality" as his work is poor. And if you want readers to come to your website to read something in English, do not hire deepak.
     
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  4. deepak_sharma

    deepak_sharma Banned

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    #24
    SIMS2 is the most unreliable Dp'er. the person is never willing to pay and for that issue accuses the writer. here is the copy of article he required available for open to all. compare his reputation to mine and tell me who lacks basic sense of ENGLISH, he or me?

    Jimmy Bullard
    Only few people make a mark in their profession, for others to follow. In the field of sports, Jimmy Bullard is amongst a selected few who leaves a trail for others to catch upon. He took the world of football by storm showcasing some of the unique techniques and skills.
    It is a feat to conquer for all the football aspirants as Jimmy Bullard started his career in non-league football with Datford, at that time nobody could have ever imagined that he would go on to play for famous league-clubs like Ham United, Peterborough, Wigan Athletic and Fulham. At present he plays as a midfielder for Fulham.
    Jimmy Bullard started at bottom with nothing and has reached the pinnacle by putting in loads of hard work. Starting from Gravesend at a meager £60-a-week contract the 29 years old jimmy’s carrier has gone from peak to peak. He of lately has had much to smile about, with recent surprise call-up from the England national side.
    Jimmy Bullard came from very humble belongings. In his teenage years he used work with his father who was the sole supporter of his passion for football. Bullard used to work hard during the day with his father and it was only in nights that he found time for his passion. With such kind of unwavering determination and hard work, Jimmy started his career by signing up with a non league club named Datford in 1997/98.
    Having impressed everybody at Datford with his scintillating play he was transferred for free to Gravesend. It was at Gravesend where he was given a platform to show his talent and perform to be noticed by big fishes. He poured his soul into performance and was signed up for West Ham United in 1999 for thirty thousand pounds. Jimmy faltered at this stage and was transferred to Peterborough for free due to his lackluster performances.
    The transfer to Peterborough was perceived as a fall of Bullard’s career by many. Even newspapers and magazines wrote that his glittering career was down into shackles before taking off. But as a warrior, he revitalized himself and started a remarkable comeback. He performed well for Peterborough and was then shifted to Wigan athletic and finally joined Fulham in 2006/07 where he earned the price tag of 2.5 million pounds before being finally called for English national team.
    Jimmy Bullard has shown us that everybody falters, it’s just that losers quit and run while winners continue their march unabated to victory whatever the conditions.
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    the person left me a negative i-trader without even paying me. [against the rules and regulation of DP]
    help me to kick out such awful buyers from DP. These people un-necessarily try to fiddle with others reputation.
    help me to help yourself from such traitors.
     
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    #25
    Was the inital article, I then had to try and get him to do revisions (2 or 3) after he produced such poor quality work as you can see above to try and get it up to a good standard, however he failed to do this. He even sent me a PM "Sorri for the inferior work" - He knows it was bad? Again, shows his English isn't up to scratch, with "inferior" misplaced. As you can see it matches my description of a poor article in the previous posts. If you're going to review an article like he has asked, please review the inital one (the one I have posted) as it shouldn't really take me nagging him 2 or 3 times to try and get him to produce a decent article. "Quality" was simply not there, and he evidently struggles with the English language. In addition, there is a complete lack of football knowledge in the article. FAR from quality.

    Rant over! :cool:
     
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  6. deepak_sharma

    deepak_sharma Banned

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    #26
    sims stop being so immature. what finally matters is the final quality which i provided and you said i'll pay you.
    stop trying to defend yourself and admit your mistake.

    and better go and have a look at the rules and regulations
    no i trader exchange shall be done without payment of the article.
     
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    #27
    What quality of the final article? The final article is still of a poor quality. I also believe you too did an iTrader exchange without the payment of the article... After you Threatening me a few times, I decided to burst the bubble and go ahead. You can't provide quality content, but you said you could in other threads? After threatI decided to show your first article, so people can see what a bad content provider you actually are. I shouldn't have to keep hassling you to revise the article to get it up to an acceptable "ok" standard should I? The article was for a blog, however it's useless as it's poor English and most things connected with football in the article are untrue. Was basically a re-write of a few news sites for Bullard, done in your own semi-English writing.
     
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    deepak_sharma Banned

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    #28
    i don't really give a damn to your views.
    keep on posting. and leave the quality of final article for review by others.
    and you were never hassling for the re-writes
    i offered it myself.
    anyways you carry on posting here.
    you seem to have enough time
    i have my clients and i-traders to support me. you seem to be very much interested in posting here.
    keep it on.
    carry on these practices on DP and surely you will lose these 6 i-traders also
     
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  9. Sims2

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    #29
    I don't give a shit about how many iTraders I have got on Digital point forums. Perhaps they're life points for you and to go down -1 is suicidal. Put me into red, I couldn't care less. Learn English properly, before claiming you can offer "quality" articles. Anyway, it's $3, i'll give you it if it means so much to you.

    Aww, I thought you "Loved" client satisfaction?

    Perhaps if you would actually like to take some time when writing articles then you may do them to a higher standard... If you do them all in a hurry it's not surprising they turn out like the first one did. You even claimed your own work was of a poor quality when first sent, why? Disatisfied, nevertheless i'll send you the $3 so you can sleep tonight.
     
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    deepak_sharma Banned

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    #30
    keep your money and this article for free. so that you can stop chattering. i think that was what you were aiming at from the beginning. I aim customer satisfaction and not traitor- satisfaction.
    so better go off and catch some other article writer offer an order and accept it for free by accusing him of poor quality.
     
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  11. Sims2

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    #31
    It's been sent now mate, I couldn't really care less about giving £1.50 away once in a while. I don't want the article despite paying for it, so if anyone wants it, just ask. Anyway, i've paid now so "Doesn't pay ever" on my iTrader comments seems slightly wrong doesn't it. :rolleyes: Meh. In your posting as well on these forums, it's evident your English skills are very poor.

    It was of a very poor quality, and the quicker you realise it the better. Anyway, i've found another article writer, one that understands English. :)
     
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    deepak_sharma Banned

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    #32
    dude then go and use him.
    your money has been refunded to your account.
    stop bugging me.
     
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    #33
     
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    #34
    Hello, I just had to make a comment on this as a content provider. The article which I read above is not something I'd submit to my buyer as it has several mistakes in it which any person who is fluent in English would see. Instead of using pronouns to describe the subject after the first introduction, the article uses the name Jimmy Bullard over and over. Using a proper name like that without pronouns makes it sound like you're just putting random facts together like a Chuck Norris monologue.

    Jimmy Bullard doesn't sleep, he waits. Jimmy Bullard's tears cure cancer, too bad he's never cried.

    That's not something you want. I also noticed several word choices which are just... out of place. Such as:

    With such kind of unwavering determination and hard work

    That should read, "With such unwavering determination and hard work..." Adding words to get your post count doesn't make you a quality writer.

    SIMS2, I understand why you didn't pay this guy, but the negative iTrader could have been without. :) Anyway, that's just my two cents on the situation, as a content provider myself.
     
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    #35
    Ok fair enough, never been in this situation myself before. Deepak, apologies that the deal didn't go as planned in a way we're both to blame. If you ever want the payment again, don't hesitate to ask for it. I'll not be using the article, so feel free to sell it on again or use it for other things.
     
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    #36
    In all fairness, I think that article is substandard, and even the revised version is pretty poor. Sorry Deepak, but as an experienced write who speaks English as a native language, I wouldn't want to put that work on my blog. No disrespect to you, as you seem to have built up a good reputation for yourself here on DP, but if I were you I would be happy that the client has paid. I think you need to go back to your normal service and forget about Sims, you clearly have a decent client base so stop focusing your attention on this client, and stop being so immature.

    I'm not taking sides here, and nor do I mean to be disrespectful to the writer, but at the end of the day the article was substandard and I'm giving Deepak some writer-to-writer advice here. :)

    With all due respect I think you should both accept that the deal didn't go through properly, shake hands (virtually :p) and get on with your lives.

    EDIT: Sorry, I didn't see the above comment before I posted.
     
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    #37
    Baffled why every single client in this thread except me has said he has produced great/quality work for them.
     
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    #38
    Sometimes quality is in the eye of the beholder, Sims2. Take that to heart. :)
     
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