Newbie requires help from pros

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by contentedge, Dec 3, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hi guys,
    I have a site on cellphone advertising and marketing. It's a fairly new site and I'm working on it for some time now. Now, I need your help.

    I'd like to get your opinions/views on my latest post. Could you guys please tell me

    1. Was the post good enough to make you read till the end?

    2. Was the writing style good enough? (I'm not a native speaker)

    3. Did the post provide you with some useful info?

    4. Will this kind of a post make the readers come back to the site again?

    I'm a newbie and I'd appreciate if you guys could help me out in this issue. I know a lot of you guys are seasoned pros and I'd love to get your comments/views/suggestions/opinions. It will help me a lot in the long run.

    I'd like to thank all you guys for your valuable time.
     
    contentedge, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  2. bad_bob00

    bad_bob00 Active Member

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    I read most of the text, not sure if it might help if you try to break it up a bit with maybe one more sub heading or two.

    I liked the writing style, it was easy enough to follow and was interesting too.

    The post had some interesting info, although i'm not too sure if I would be interested in receiving adverts on my phone.

    The post will probably make people come back to the site if interested in the scheme ;)


    Good luck with the site
     
    bad_bob00, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  3. contentedge

    contentedge Active Member

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    Bad bob, I knew I could always count on you. :) Thanks very much.
     
    contentedge, Dec 3, 2007 IP
  4. Rybackwealthgroup

    Rybackwealthgroup Peon

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    I see you have an area where people can make a post. You should consider an area on your site where you collect people emails so you can send them an auto responder update with info. This could be a good way to track how many people are interested in your product.

    Good luck!

    Jason Ryback



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    Rybackwealthgroup, Dec 4, 2007 IP
  5. contentedge

    contentedge Active Member

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    Thanks Jason. I appreciate it. :)
     
    contentedge, Dec 4, 2007 IP