New website. Let me know if you see typos, dead links.

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by webgal, May 31, 2009.

  1. #1
    OK, when you design, write, upload and do all the work, something gets missed. I've done spell check and read it over but I know I'm missing stuff. If you take a look, let me know if you see any errors.

    Thanks.

    http://annemoss.com
     
    webgal, May 31, 2009 IP
  2. DianeS55

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    Anne it is such a professional and visually-appealing site.

    The colorful zebra in the midst of the black and white crowd is a great graphic!

    May I offer two suggestions?

    1. Instead of a slide show button, can you set up a slideshow that automatically plays upon the site loading? It seems more and more this is what business people are getting used to seeing.

    2. The sentence 'Call me if you want results.' seems to not get your point across. Would something like 'If your business seeks an increase in its ROI this quarter, contact me right away at .....' or something like that, something more direct and with more details and action, be more useful?

    Best of luck to you with your site!
     
    DianeS55, May 31, 2009 IP
  3. NICKY Nitro

    NICKY Nitro Well-Known Member

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    #3
    the colors of the zebra hurt my eyes...pick just one color...it doesn't have to be in multiple colors in order to stand out...it could be a green zebra or something...
     
    NICKY Nitro, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  4. the-big-boss

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    #4
    the idea is nice the layout is good however the zebra thing although using diffrent colors still not a very good effect but you could try a red zebra to match the page
     
    the-big-boss, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  5. ceemage

    ceemage Well-Known Member

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    I *like* the multi-coloured zebra. It's a powerful, iconic image.
     
    ceemage, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  6. ceemage

    ceemage Well-Known Member

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    That would also work - since the aim of web marketing is to produce well-re(a)d websites.

    (Sorry - it's been a long day...)
     
    ceemage, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  7. webgal

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    So far some have reacted to the zebra background as being competitive with the visual. So I might change it to a gray or gray gradient.

    As far as the zebra, that visual is on my biz card and part of my brand. The biz card has been a huge hit and it's part of the reason I'm booked through the summer. (YEEEEHAAAA!)

    I think Diane has a point and that I have "stand out, get results" and probably need to refine that to a more specific call to action as the end line.
     
    webgal, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  8. cd928

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    Hey Anne. The site looks fantastic. I should say it's much more striking than the previous site. Haven't seen any dead links so far.

    Anyway, just a comment on the slides at the index page. I'm not really sure what the other slides intend to do or add to the site. Maybe the 'Next Slide' button isn't descriptive enough, I couldn't tell.

    I hope that helps. :)
     
    cd928, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  9. coolamazer

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    Great looking site. However dont you think the zebra is over colored?
     
    coolamazer, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  10. webgal

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    Nope. Zebra is not overcolored. <grin> It has a wow factor on the biz card I wouldn't trade for the universe. And I do get the the kind of clients I want as a result.

    Maybe an arrow on the slide button. That crossed my mind. I'll try an arrow. I made some changes. I will make more in the next week, just hitting the highlights now. Thanks you guys.
     
    webgal, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  11. Hs McD

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    i like the zebra:D
     
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    #12
    The colorful Zebra looks good.
    It delivers a meaning to the site visitors.
    It tells that it he is unique from all other zebras.
     
    ThereseLim, Jun 8, 2009 IP
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    i like it it looks great!
     
    morg, Jun 13, 2009 IP
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    #14
    the zebra thing is pretty boss just to be honest.

    cheers, evil
     
    evilman11, Jun 21, 2009 IP
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    #15
    Very nice site. It keeps the visitor interested.
     
    kocur, Jul 6, 2009 IP
  16. webgal

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    Thanks you guys for your input. I appreciate the time you took to take a look and comment.
     
    webgal, Jul 6, 2009 IP
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    #17
    It looks very professional and the colored zebra is eye catching.
     
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    #18
    this is pretty cool, keep it up,i digg the zebra too. you got a good outlet going.
     
    ravex, Jul 6, 2009 IP