www.chelxabong.com I don't want to say anything about the site, since I'd like first impressions and all about it like a regular user would have. Let me know what you think needs fixing/changing on the site. Anything positive would be appreciated as well
Perhaps a bit more general information about 'bath bombs', you can hire content copywriters on this site. Bath bombs might have a few negative connotations in the West. Looks interesting.
The text is great, really uplifting and creative. But the colors don't support it, I'm not sure my girl or whomever would want to buy from a site that it so dark. Bath products - I think the site should be lighter and more alivelike your asian beauty blog site.
So far: Lighter colors Better (more) description text for the bath bombs. I'll add these into the next round of updates. As for the interface itself, does anybody have any problems/comments? Thanks
Bath Bombs! Thats an excellent product. Like the other guys said I think you should be more descriptive. Maybe you could upload a video of the Bath Bombs in action as well, im sure that would increase sales.
I like the darkness of the site as i feel it is fitting to the glowing bath bombs. It really makes the user see the products first. Until you get some more products on the page I would add the different types of bath bombs to the main page. Adding the other images will make the site more vibrant. Otherwise the main page is really small and doesn't look like somewhere I would purchase goods from. Can easily be fixed though with my suggestion
Add more info on what exactly you are selling, i was on your site for over 1 min, still couldnt figure it out ( and 1 min is more than what customers will be there at the website ) Also, if your site is going to be popular, you might want to avoid your email id on it, use a simple php feedback form. if you need help setting it up, pm me.
The layout is good. I would definitely add a little more color and maybe as the home page, fill up the space a little more. I love the ball of soap icons, very colorful and relevant to what you are selling.
I would recommend stating what you are actually going to get when you buy one of the bath bombs. Am I paying $4 for one, or will I get a tiny basket full, like a set? I would suggest selling both individual ones and a set of them. Or, you can just sell them as a set, like 4,8, or 10 for a certain price. Then, you could also sell a set that has one of each 'flavor' in it. I really wouldn't want to shop your site as it is now and have to add each individual bath bomb to my shopping cart if I wanted several different kinds. If I was a bath bomb addict, I would like an easy way to buy like 10 at a time.....